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Old 04-21-06, 08:51 PM   #1
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Change the Game **EASTSYDE** PEEP THIS SHIT
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new track on the soundclick page....peep it and leave links....i'm lookin for flow and lyrics not quality because i can't do anything about quality untill i get a new mic...




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2725121

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2725126
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Old 04-21-06, 09:52 PM   #2
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What's hot:
decent beat
quality wasn't bad




What' Not:

that loud motorcycle sound effect
monotonous delivery
flow



Overall:
played theme

step it up
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Old 04-21-06, 10:06 PM   #3
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thanks for the feed...uppin
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Old 04-21-06, 10:54 PM   #4
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hmmm old beat...

started off off beat... and pretty much stayed that way... but you were pretty clear... had a few nice punches... yeah for the most part I gotta agree with what Q said...

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Old 04-22-06, 12:19 AM   #5
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so basically the shit was all off beat???...i'll get at ya track tomorrow when i'm not half asleep thanks for the feed though
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yeah I was listening while I was replying... so I thaught that you were gonna fall on beat as you got into the track further... but it just didn't ahppen... my b on any confusion...
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Old 04-22-06, 12:19 PM   #7
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wow something must be wrong with me because i think i do sound on beat...i mean no hate to you or anything but i thought it sounded on beat and everything...hmmmm...maybe it's all opinions...i do appreciate the feed i do need to work on the flow
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