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Old 06-03-06, 11:57 PM   #1
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Old 06-04-06, 12:01 AM   #2
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beats ok....

1st...need to fix ur quality...noise reduct bro...hooks nice tho...pops n shit, watch your lvls...up ur delevery and emotion......maybe rethink the amount of sylabels used...not enough IMO and kinda fucks up flow...

2nd verse..flow starts nice...emotion is lackluster though...deep lyrics though..I feel ya here man...

can hear the emotion in ur writing but..not in ur voice man..get more comfortable on the mic

keep it up though bro..
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Old 06-04-06, 12:07 AM   #3
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Feel ya, thanks for the feed..
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Old 06-05-06, 11:02 PM   #4
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The beat's real light. I personally don't like, sounds liek it was made by a producer that doesn't rap so wouldn't know what a rapper would look for. The hook, well the lyrics were on point, but it sounds like you need a pop filter like woah. lyrics were on but damn your recording habits need some grooming and some EQing in a big way.

some places your flow is too slow like you're trying to let it linger too long for you to keep it on flow, then other places you stuff too many syls into one bar.

ok song, but I don't like the beat for a rap track and the recording qual is in need. the lyrics were on point

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Old 06-05-06, 11:35 PM   #5
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ahh thanks for the feed man..i know everyone tells me the Qual needs work...and i know that...lol bout the Click pop filter....what can i use for that..lol cheap wise..
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ahhh, pop filter your "brokin's" are Breaking my ear drums......well damn someone else did a love song....well i love you and im hurt song.....oh well, your very uhh, un confident is seems, like your reading and trying really hard just to get the words out........its like your thinking WAY too much about it and not letting it happen, i feel ya i had that problem at one point, just get your confort on the mic up....do some battles to up ya delivery n youll get better.....rtf in a lil....cuz im about to ambush the songs fourm
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ahh thanks for the feed man..i know everyone tells me the Qual needs work...and i know that...lol bout the Click pop filter....what can i use for that..lol cheap wise..



cheap? a sock. panty hose and a wire hanger would be your best cheap alternative, but in a case like yours, I'd say start with the trusty sock. you'll lose some clarity (sounds more muffled) but you'll reduce a huge load of that pop action you got there, called Plosives - P's, B's, etc.

you'll come out ahead in the deal. just remember that it's a temporary bandaid, not a fix.

oh yeah, and learn to EQ, that'll work WONDERS on your vocals. Ideally I would have liked to tell you "move back a few inches from the mic" (to automacially reduce your plosives) but you're going to need to EQ some levels to offset the distance. there's a link in my sig. click it.


and there's also a thread in uhh..in Audio Talk I believe, titled "recording with quality" that'll benefit you a TON.


Those two posts together can turn anyone's vocals from turds to gems and maximize your investment. You work less, and get more!


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