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Whys That?
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Key to his brain ( sample track off Poetic Artist Youth mindstate Album)
IP: 5285 DC82
Me? ( Sample track to Poetic Artist's, Youth mindstate)
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4045563&q=hi Lyrics, so if you feel theres a accent barrier, read along ![]() im street legal defeat people,never see evil
i stay vigulant on heavy stimulants never given a shit you know me thru your local,corrputing vocals with a lyrical choke hold i never heard a you ,you checkin my shit like theres a pervert in you im unexplainable, unmaintanable brains un drainable knowledge is 360 degrees Im flipping these trees not cripping and b's just ripping these steez im an interlectual, just manafesting all my years of anger im a person who loves rap,understand why doves flap twice before flight i ignore bright light,it could be the gate....or is hell my fate i drop ryhmes nearer the date never scared a the hate,im prepared to be great focus on the mission ahead have million swishing im dead past actions left your ass asking who laughs last grabs the cash and dash live life for MA double S E y fogive your envy no guessing why stuck in your subconious mind so much hype apon this rhyme still the same since day one, no essence lost praying to god and ask how much his blessings cost i stalk death or is it the other way round fuck it, earths my play ground follow my own path, carry my own cross be my own man and my own boss daily feel the pain of earth stabbing my heart like mediavel horses tied to my legs and dragging me apart thoughts could fill a hundred libary shelfs id rather be broke then sell out to have wealth I see through your insecure lies you would shut your mouth if you are wise place mirrors behind me so i can look into the past and see what the future demands was labeled out of control by society one turn of the key is the only way theyll say good bye to me Mind runs deeper than your imagination willing to fix each and every damaged nation Got to much love some easily turns to hate Tryna path my own road,and pray heavens my fate im afraid of god, thats why I speak so harsh but im his key to the devils brain thats why i keep so dark at time i feel im missing a peice of heart yin and yang is chemically unbalanced and at war peace si what we strive for but at times i look to the stars and ask what im alive for I know exactly who am i am on earth what if wish my ma never gave birth Props need to go to anno domni for his redemtion beat http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228821 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228324 |
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New to RV
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IP: EECB F471
ok...in the nicest way possible....I hated it. like...i didnt like a single thing about it. first off...beat choice didnt work well with ur voice. ur voice was HELLA MUFFLED. u should work on some mixxing. ur flow was more like just talking, and talking, and talking...did u even listen to the beat when u wrote the song?
id suggest going out and buying a new microphone that isnt $15 dollars and from Radio Shack. next...go download a program where u can do some basic vocal mixxing. and then, go spend about 3 hours...and dig thru Soundclick to find some instrumentals that might match ur voice betta. AND WHEN ALL THAT IS SED AND DONE... go turn on a Cassidy track and take some notes on flowwing. then re-rewrite, re-record, and re-mix it. good luck
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