Points taken


yeah thanx y'all...

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hahahaha...thanx all the same



still upping this i guessssssssssss

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*nods head*
this beat sounds retarted as shit but some reason....it's workin w/ ur delivery =/ n i'm actually feelin it. turn up ya vocals a lil bit, it's hard to hear what your sayin sometimes. Flow's on point, i won't say anything about the lyrics cuz i couldnt make out some of it not to mention im in too much of a hurry to re-listen. quality is good as well, not bad keep droppin

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Beats very nice,dont fuck it up!!!!!J/p...anyway im feelin your flow its real nice....the rhyme scheme is koo,nice! its mad diffwerent....like the changes,good!....anyway deliverys koo,could be upped a lot as it seems your rappin for the sake of it,Meh...you could come with more anger as its a diss,BUT i think your mic takes a lot away from this track as it seems you are spitting in the background and not actually spitting on the beat that much,emotions koo,feelin it,i like how you support the beat with the vocals which seem to be mixed in with the beat to make it sound fluid,nice,i think you need to eq it a lil better....i think your presence is alrgiht BUT you mic,like i said,takes soooooo much away from your presence,delivery....either get a new one or get a better mixing process..j wonderin..what mic have you got???????Seems cheap lol......I like the lyrics but as you didnt write them meh..but i know you can write well so its all good...Well all this said i think its a nice track but your mic def takes a shitload away from your presence...........just get a new mic and your all set!!I'd say youd be one of the better audio heads on RV if you got a better mic..BTW YOU HAVE A DOPE TASTE IN BEATS haha

RTF Here Plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230833

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OYD MAFIA

haha thanx hun...


yeah u were right my mic is damn cheap...the head is off..when i spit i gatta hold it all together...lol...

i'm fucking broke...


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this beat kinda requires grimmier emotion... i dig ya lyrics and ya flows on point, shits a lil too quite.
.. up the energy and get grimmier word with the drop tho fam.. keep up

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BEATS NOT BAD.......flows iight, emotion is a bit low...libs r a tad off in spots...kinda hard to understand what ur saying in spots.....strong point here was the flow....

not bad tho

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

thanxxxx a lot y'all...


but what r libs btw???????

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