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Old 08-20-06, 09:07 PM   #1
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15. Mystic (2-2) vs. 16. Erel Avent (8-3)

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Old 08-20-06, 10:51 PM   #2
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Old 08-20-06, 11:31 PM   #3
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Old 08-21-06, 09:06 AM   #4
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Erel Avent- 2 links
Mystic.- 2 links

If you don't do required number, it's a deduction of ONE vote for each missing link
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Old 08-23-06, 01:23 AM   #5
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listen..

Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher
So consider this a lesson.. your ego.. bitch Ima rip it
..snatch the M out ya name turn it around & walkin off wit it
You may have barely passed the Test last week.. but damn
..with my dick in your mouth man your gonna ace the oral exam

give me my fuckin win.
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Old 08-24-06, 03:59 PM   #6
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Your avy explains you well..little black boy wit a warn nose
Shit your a fucking vegatable no wonder you got corn rows
I swear you said you was going 20 lines...this dogg lies
Lookin like a fuckin alien in yah avy with them bug eyes
Your being denied a win..when you lose then you will see
When we clash in the ring..
Ill flip you and your name hope you see this Avent erel-y
8-3 shit from you i think im sensin hate towards me
Oh well idc lets battle i guess thats a free win for me
Shit i done did it you wont believe that i set it off right quick
You only cummin quick with 1 thing and that be your dick!
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Old 08-24-06, 06:58 PM   #7
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher
So consider this a lesson.. your ego.. bitch Ima rip it
..snatch the M out ya name turn it around & walkin off wit it

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Your being denied a win..when you lose then you will see
When we clash in the ring..
Ill flip you and your name hope you see this Avent erel-y


I had to give mystic the quotable on the Avent line just cuz the concept was ok but i still didnt like it


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Old 08-25-06, 05:45 PM   #8
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one-zilch, vote f0ckers.
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Old 08-26-06, 01:06 PM   #9
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
lol. decent nameplay
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it
lol
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher
decent
So consider this a lesson.. your ego.. bitch Ima rip it
..snatch the M out ya name turn it around & walkin off wit it
lol, decent again
You may have barely passed the Test last week.. but damn
..with my dick in your mouth man your gonna ace the oral exam
okay

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Your avy explains you well..little black boy wit a warn nose
Shit your a fucking vegatable no wonder you got corn rows
ehh
I swear you said you was going 20 lines...this dogg lies
Lookin like a fuckin alien in yah avy with them bug eyes
nah man
Your being denied a win..when you lose then you will see
When we clash in the ring..
Ill flip you and your name hope you see this Avent erel-y
ehh
8-3 shit from you i think im sensin hate towards me
Oh well idc lets battle i guess thats a free win for me
nah man, this is weak
Shit i done did it you wont believe that i set it off right quick
You only cummin quick with 1 thing and that be your dick!
omg. a fucking cum line. PLAYED

v- erel, this was one sided. idk, i didnt feel anyhting from mystics verse. it was all weak, erel had some decent ish that took the win for him.
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Old 08-26-06, 01:36 PM   #10
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher

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nothing

V/ Avent.. his first 3 bars were great
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Old 08-26-06, 02:16 PM   #11
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher

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nothing

danm dog need i say more.....

earl won hands down...
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Old 08-26-06, 02:59 PM   #12
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it

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nothing

Lol @ the first 2 bars

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Old 08-26-06, 04:35 PM   #13
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I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher

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Nothing

Yeh, Erel came pretty nice...that was the only quoteable IMO, and you had some other ok/decent bars - your first bar was funny, not really dissing him tho - Mystic, lmao that cummin line was the most hilarious one of the battle (not in a quotable type of way...tho) - you came weak man, just making statements - need to make your lines harsh n witty, make them clever n stuff coz any newb can do what you did...stay up, tho

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Old 08-26-06, 05:11 PM   #14
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E.A.

Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it
I'm leavin ya flatlined.. if you say Mystics beatin me you'sa lier
we both movin up in the ranks
..I'm gettin closeer to the title while your numbers gettin higher

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Mys

Your avy explains you well..little black boy wit a warn nose
Shit your a fucking vegatable no wonder you got corn rows

V/ E.A.
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Old 08-26-06, 07:39 PM   #15
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Our records arent even close.. nor is our fuckin talent clown
Ima get charged with domestic abuse for slappin Mys around
I got a long list of bitches.. hoes bend over N tell me to do it
..while ya ass is like the streets, nothin but niggas runnin thru it

v.

Your avy explains you well..little black boy wit a warn nose
Shit your a fucking vegatable no wonder you got corn rows

^ haha, yo, if it were a pic battle, this'd be dope.. it's cool though.


v/ erel. had one more quotable with an overall better verse.. mystic on the other hand had a cumline, but, i did like the corn rows line.. i thought that was kinda cool. but yeah, erel was more polished for sure here.
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