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Old 02-15-03, 10:08 AM   #1
liam
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welcome

IP: 5761 F70D

welcme to my brand new rap show
iam hear to demolish all fake g's who claim day ante hoe's/
all these acts all these user's
who claim day 5 mic but day bitching loser's/
if day get big but day wont of course
day would sell more adverts then in the source/
iam gonna send every fake g to iraq and rip up there passport's
and just to make sure day dont cum back iam'a snap there spinal courd/
so now iam gonna take it to shitters wid no bling bling
who i will black ball and make sure day cant cant even gat a job in burger king/
if u match what ive just said u best leave because if u get caught iam getting done for first degree/
this is just aseven bar rieyme just to introduce my self
if u against this then fuck u an everyone else/
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Old 02-15-03, 04:50 PM   #2
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hmm...you need originality to stand out here, this is too plain in the vocab, imagry, multis, up the ante on your rhymes.

a good topic is half the battle towards illness.
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