http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1506#post301506

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1508#post301508

fuck it, i'm just doing this for a laugh, taking a nas angle on it. heres some shit from my notepad, just thumb through it.

i'm so sick i could kill the ebola virus/
more than power than tyrants, i roll with pirates/
a karma killer, every word is spat quicker/
than half-arsed rappers who dilute with filler/
lady mag-net, and i aint come out bad-yet/
good for your health but hard like an iron clad-vet/
i'll fix you birds, choose careful when you pick-your-words/
i'm greased up enough to make the slick-absurd/

**turns a few pages**

i'll tell you half a story you can fill in the blanks/
kill off half your army, better fill in the ranks/

nice....**turns a few more**

fuck you uptight fellas and you racial-thugs/
i'd take a girl, fuck her colour, for some spacial-love/
get her screaming like she dying from my facial-studs/
get plaster falling down from fellatio-thuds/
see, it aint no surprise that i wrote-up-the-best/
come across as cocky when i gloat-at-the-rest/
get rappers scrambling for the notes-on-my-desk/
then crying with your useless pens you broke-on-your-chest/
optimists, lazy writers think they can order-shine/
they like dyslexic fillers they couldnt sort-a-rhyme/
meanwhile i evolve and move toward-a-time/
where we take the talent when we cross the borderline/

blah, just drops from my brainstorming, enjoy.

nice shit....some good vocab in ther and some sick multis....flowed real well because of this. some sick lines



^^^ ill

good verse

^agreed, those were some pretty nice lines you came up with. I was feeling those 2 lines you quoted above me and here's a couple more...

i'm so sick i could kill the ebola virus/
more than power than tyrants, i roll with pirates/

especially the first line... ill

pz

cheers very much for the +ve feedback fella's. i'll be keeping my eyes peeled for your work as well.

uppin this one time^^

was good, i liked all the multis n stuff

i'll tell you half a story you can fill in the blanks/
kill off half your army, better fill in the ranks/

dont think the book of rhymes angle really worked tho, think it would ony really work on audio

Mad creative...I was feeling alot of those lines...nice

Okay i dont know if I should suck on ya nuts or dick.....but the shit was ill......it was anything but basic and VERY ORIGINAL!...
then muthafuckas wonder why they cant EXPAND....cuz faggots like myself have to hate and shit.....I can't help but to hate on the people I'm feel threatened by.... my shit is weak and that's why I haven't dropped anything on this site b/c I want to hate but not get hated on... nah mean?... I should get banned for being a fudgepacking cock licker like I am... someone please kill me!



Peace......
1..............

Rawdeadly..oops..I mean BITCH!
^^this guy is a bitch ass fagg...^^

nice spit J... keep doin what ya do playah..

I'd fuckin' choke you till ya die bitch if I knew you mutha fucka, I'd fuckin' rip ya tounge out and shove it up ya ass! on tha real BITCH!

yeah, shit was good, i liked it, not surprised though i'd seen some of the text stuff 6-Feet done before and they was all good