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Old 02-16-03, 07:24 AM   #1
liam
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liam vs lyl-e ink

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10 bars each
1 post each
3 vote ko
irl go first then
 
Old 02-16-03, 08:04 AM   #2
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yo yo
what bitch now u wanna battle
me using a microphine is like letting this gun rattle/1
iam a mother fucking sicko so u best gimmie respect
iam a rip off ur head and for fun and shit down ur neck/2
my heart is painted black and it is damb colder
by the time that i shot u ur hand wont even be at ur holster/3
u the slowest mother fuckin bitch on this earth
by the term slow i mean ur rieymes ar wack u dont have the right to make it to birth/4
ur fake u like mother fuckin plastic
even ur parents claim u acksident/5
ur mother fuckin wackness dont need a introduction
iam blowing u up from the inside like human cumbustion/6
its like we in a boxing ring lyl-e stink but no one thinks u can win
iam not gonna read ur responce it ante worth it it should be put in the bin/7
by the time this is finished u must imigrate and never use the internet again
cause they will find out where u live and kill u for being noncence/8
by the time where finshed u will be up my ass like ur mums dildo
u dance cross ur new rap name should be mAnHo/9
so what the fuck is gonna happen at the of the day
u will be dressed up as a woman telling ur self u ante gay/10
 
Old 02-16-03, 08:34 AM   #3
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y0 check it...
kid before y0o can even do any harm to anyone learn how to compose a literally correct sentence//1
afta i get dun wit y0o ill put mo same t0o y0o than y0o did at y0 own high skoo reunion//2
each of mah rhymes got venomous strings...it got y0o swelled up like Fat Joe//3
y0 rhymes are wack lez ask tha board, can liam rap? NO!!!//4
mah rhymes are like mah testicals...so big y0o admire//5
tha only way that it can get worse is if havin all y0 disses backfire//6
buh that aint bad...cuz y0 disses aint shit...im swingin hits harder than Mcgwuire//7
i battle y0o wit words to many verses of nouns n proverbs down tha 'bet frum A to Z//8
then rite bak to tha top...get shot lyrically..stop y0career as an EmCee//9
there aint no need t0o continue this battle, i beat dis kid so bad i got him rappin to rasin cattle....

uppin fo votes
 
Old 02-16-03, 08:53 AM   #4
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liam=vote

both verses were good both took my atention...I wuz gonna vote 4 Lyl but i noticed this....Y0o,y0o,y0o..and that fuked up his flow
 
Old 02-16-03, 12:08 PM   #5
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UPPIN 4 VOTES
 
Old 02-16-03, 02:52 PM   #6
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0-1 uppin
 
Old 02-16-03, 02:52 PM   #7
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do i win since no one else isvoting we will give it till tomorrow night and if there is no more votes i win cause 1-0 to me
 
Old 02-16-03, 02:56 PM   #8
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no...

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no y0o dun win since no wun else is votin...jez giv it sum time...one.ghost
 
Old 02-16-03, 05:31 PM   #9
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0-1 stil uppin
 
Old 02-16-03, 06:06 PM   #10
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Since nobody else voted, I'll do it. Both of the verses were kind of whack. I mean, yall both used too many nursery rhymez, meaning stuff like 'battle,rattle and admire and backfire" Come on be real. But, you both got a way with werds, which is a big plus. I give my vote to LyL bcuz he came harder. I felt it more.

But no doubt, both of yalls flowed like a fukking river. Good job!!

VOTE=LyL
 
Old 02-20-03, 05:02 AM   #11
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1-1

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1-1 still uppin!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 02-20-03, 10:26 AM   #12
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I agree with Finesse.....this battle was weak....I'm givin my vote to LyL cuz he came a little harder an he had betta word play......liam, i notice ya verses in every battle almost sound the same.....get creative, change tha shit up...

vote = LyL
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Old 02-20-03, 03:35 PM   #13
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vote = lyl

this was better from you liam, but you still have a lot of elevating to do and you still didnt do enough for the win.....good try but the other dude outcalssed you slightly.

you need to work on punches.....
 
Old 02-20-03, 04:10 PM   #14
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Vote=lyl
I think his flow was tighter, even though y'all both had too many words.
try rhyming to the beat and trim off some of that access flab
 
 


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