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Old 02-18-03, 05:35 AM   #1
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I jump another level

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The only fight i have is with myself


You think your safe in the dark but your never alone
Because when the lights are out your shadow finds him self at home
Free to roam, in the dark with camouflage capabilities
Waiting for the precise moment to attack and get rid of me
Constantly hitting me with the lost scenes of my life
Cut out by the director but brought back with the strife
I slash with a knife, at a target that cant be hit
Look down at my own wrists and realize they’ve been split
How much spit will it take, to separate fake from my fate
No one can dictate a date because time can not relate
So I erase the slate and go back to the beginning
To see my own shadow in the dark is the one that is grinning
Am I the one sinning? Believing in what seems deceiving ?
And grieving over the fact that my life lacks any meaning
It got lost in the screening when god was looking for answers
But instead got cancer from messing around with to many topless dancers
My file then sent to the chancellor who tossed into the trash
So instead of class they just told me id never pass
They told me to go to mass and harass god with my problems
But he’s the one sick from my shit and the reason I’ve got um.
Now they just haunt him, my prayers are sent back with a note
“your fucked up kid now just leave me alone”
So I’m back on my own, And I’m jumped by the dark with a flash
Before the blood from my mouth can come out in a splash
I take off in a dash, but I’m not being chased
Its my shadow again, the one I thought I erased
But just displaced with the thought I just that he finally gave up
I thought heed get out when I tossed the pills in the cup
Then right before I erupt I turned and he wasn’t there
But I was just fucked from the shit now my visions impaired
Now I cry when I’m scared because I cant feel my legs
And even though I cant see, my shadow cries when he begs
Knows the mistakes that I made were because he rode on my back
So the only way to be free was look into the mirror and attack



i think i can go even more on this and make it a full track.
what do u think?
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Old 02-18-03, 06:52 AM   #2
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It's kind a craze
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Old 02-18-03, 07:11 AM   #3
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say what?
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Old 02-18-03, 12:47 PM   #4
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ready thi...
upin
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Old 02-18-03, 09:53 PM   #5
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is anyone going to reply on this?
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Old 02-18-03, 10:00 PM   #6
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Thumbs up ILL...

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Yeh this was tight as fuck dawg, Fuckin' great story tellin' and imagenation. Word usage was of tha hook, and ya flow is crazy nice son. Kept on-point throuh-out tha whole peice, and I enjoyed this throuh to tha end dawgie. Keep droppin' dem spits playah, I'll peep'em for-sure.

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-"You think your safe in the dark but your never alone
Because when the lights are out your shadow finds him self at home
Free to roam, in the dark with camouflage capabilities
Waiting for the precise moment to attack and get rid of me"

I like how you set it off, but I liked tha whole spit, no doubt-no problems wit-it at all.

I think this would be a hot track dawgie

uppin'

peace
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Old 02-19-03, 01:24 AM   #7
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yo

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I sent you a Pm about some shit I want to talk to you about...

also check out my open mic too dawg...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31705

peace
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Old 02-19-03, 01:54 PM   #8
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I'm gay, would you like for me to give you a blowjob... I'll even let you choose... Spit or Swallow?... The offer is on the table... just let me know, I'm waiting!...

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Old 02-19-03, 06:57 PM   #9
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Damn, what a faggot^^^

lmao...
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Old 02-20-03, 04:50 PM   #10
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lol it is funny....but trust me kid i dont get mad cuz a nigga chagnes my post of the truth....its aight we all know that's ya "cyber buddy" **wink-wink**....lol

keep changing my posts Mod boy they make me laugh




Peace.....
1.........
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Old 02-20-03, 09:55 PM   #11
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that was nice, you always come nice, your better then me so i wont bother with the tips, just keep posting and help RB from getting wack

LOL at domain thats fucked up
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Old 02-24-03, 03:36 AM   #12
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thanks bro
thats the only reason why i come here anymore
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Old 02-24-03, 04:15 AM   #13
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Just wondering, I'm not stressin' it. didn't know if it was just me or if it was everybody. You don't like that shit or what? I think it's a straight site. Crew is nice too.
oh-well

peace

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Old 02-24-03, 04:27 AM   #14
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who cares
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