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Old 02-22-03, 07:08 PM   #1
D-MinDz
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Question ReaPeR MenTaLLiTy

IP: 27F6 F1D6

Rhymes define D-MinDz like i define reason/
leaving the rap game like a form of treason/
so ill, sick lyricists look like the common cold compared to me/
dare to beef/
come cut my heart out, come slice my throat/
walk around like u god but pussy im the ghost/
dont gloat ur rhymes are hot but mine can roast/
so boast all u want cuz wen shit comes to shit im the boss/
talk back, attept to use ur fists, u'll end up on a cross/
to fight back, nuttin but a lost cause/
had a chance but u lost urs/
talk of 6 feet deep, you must mean under floors/
when you fuck wit me im above the law/
you nice but im raw/
hardcore to the core/
destroy your body then i come find ur soul/
might have a vest but u aint wearing a reign coat/
so i'll unleash pain wen i reign ur last hopes/
grasp the souls of all those actin like they the most/
come at me wit ur weak shit u toast/
im the reaper, im the ghost, soul keeper life taker/
all these otha gangstas much faker/
money stacks risin like bread, and im the baker/
if u want pussy u have to pay for it or rape her/
take these words on paper as truth/
too ruthless to shoot at ya dome/
torture u straight down to the bone/
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Old 02-23-03, 12:10 AM   #2
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tight

word choice was nice

a little to many words at some parts

didn't go to off track

overall a ok read

~1~
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