im sick of these damn critics claimin that i done bit this
just because i flow wit the sickness
if you got somethin to say throw your shit down
see if you any better but
i guarantee that you could never get a flow weta
cause when im spittin even when its not written its ridiculous some people say i should take over the name fabulous
cause thats how i spit this the most illest
for realist most rep artist
in the ghetto im considered the hardest
its as if im the new trend
i got more people tryin to be my friend
just cause the way i spit an jay-z say
cant stop the unstoppable shake the unshakable
break the unbrakable well i stopped the unstoppable
shook the unshakable broke the unbrakable
im damn near off the charts
makin all you mc look like old farts
my flow is sweeter than a sweat tart
you can't compare with my devious mind
your gona have to study the dictionary
just so you can have enough words
to almost keep up with my rhythms
so stop dwellin on being the best
because if you keep tryin
your gonna get so mad and hollow out your chest
my flow is to dangerous its vicious
hitin each line wit just the right precision
i guess when i started rhythmin i made the right decision
cause my flow cant be touched and no it cant be taught
so don't ask me to teach ya my style
you see its like i been touched with the heavenly bless
cause my skills are just so finess
and im to cynical some say that im to biblical
cause i worship god for what he's given me
you see im a miracle boy i had so many problems
and the only one to try and solve them
was no other but him
so say what you wish and try to set up your flow
im still gona win and i'll be happy to dismantle your shit
its your own stupidity that you fall to this
let me give you one piece of advice
don't bite off more than you chew
but since you cant comprehend shit
im just gonna tell it to you
don't step to this cause im to nice
my skill is the size of the universe
and yours is the size of a grain a rice
but if you still want to try me
you got to pay the price
well i'm chillin in the hall of fame
you can go insane in your own pitiful hall of shame
and have no other but yourself to blame
niggas can't stop my flow the illest mc what whats his name
encase you didn't know its chemistry

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comeon yo just tell me what you think

The Best Part Of This Peice Was..




The Picture ... lol ...


You Need A Lot Of Work, Try Some Inner Multi's Metaphors .. This Was Pretty Weak..

That Picture Had Ja Rule, Nelly and Lil Bow Wow In It... LMFAO! The worst three of all time.

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jae cyph you don't have to use metaphors in your rhythms i got my own style im not just like every rap artist but mabyee i'll slip in a phew

hey, same thing you said to me. without the white part.

Forget the multis, the flow was still off. Bar structure was terrible. Lyrics were decent, but still, needs alot of work. Keep em coming though, Pz!

Quality... not quanity... Peace...

Dawg... i understand you have your own style but some of that didnt even rhyme.... you have no structure, no use of multi's and no metaphors.... and basically no point to the whole thing.... im not being negative, im being honest.....keep writing though and work on it... peace