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Old 02-27-03, 01:09 AM   #1
Low Key
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Check one two

IP: 8D67 D0D6

I rock any topic - just give me a beat and watch me drop it
You're a helpless passenger, I'm a terrorist in the cock pit
Better brace for impact and buckle up coz you cant stop it
There was no f**king debris, it was me who crashed the NASA rocket
I just wanted to see it fall - people and all
Coz the evilness calls me to perform deeds that leave people in morgues
I'm a butt head - ask Beavis, he seen it before
You can't get rid of me, I'm 'hard to kill' like Steven Segal
Police never find murder weapons at the scene of my crime
My style is so lethal I kill people with a beat and a rhyme
I leave them asleep in the street for the reeper to find
I'm creeping in your speakers when I speak and be freaking your mind
Battle me? You must be outta this world, you have to be
Matter of fact you must be out this whole entire galaxy
Maybe you should put away the wacky weed and come back to reality
Then you might have a chance to come down to earth and try to rap with me
You lack the capabilities you wak faking hill billies
I'll slap and shake you silly with raps that make you cack and feel giddy
It's a pity shitty rappers inhabit my city
So I have to get gritty and bomb tracks until you're feeling me
I've got a vengeance when I drop a sentence
I rock a beat sensless, and beat the rock out of your head set
It's days of our lives and I'm young and f**king restless
I bless the microphone when ever I express the freshness
I'm an animal when I eat you up like Hannibal
It's understandable how I blast you like a cannon ball
A man of war, this pen in hand is like a sword
Samurai phantom lord, who wanna try stand and draw ?
I ban them all from my premises,
Haters and nemesis get played Sega Genesis when testing this
Remember this 'Low Key' be the cleverest
I wanna be mega rich and live the opposite of negative

Last edited by Low Key : 02-27-03 at 01:42 AM.
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Old 02-27-03, 02:15 AM   #2
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Holla at me yo.
Got any feedback / criticism ?
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Old 02-27-03, 03:40 AM   #3
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I like your concepts, but there are some parts of your rhyme that just don't flow well together to me. Like the part where you go...

'I just wanted to see it fall - people and all
Coz the evilness calls me to perform deeds that leave people in morgues
I'm a butt head - ask Beavis, he seen it before.'
It just didn't seem to flow right together. Mabye it's just the way I read it. Nah mean? Keep workin'.... Peace...
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Old 02-27-03, 06:25 PM   #4
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Yo PD.
Thanks brus.
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Old 02-27-03, 06:44 PM   #5
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phat shit i liked it
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