Just chillin like we always do
represent the east side
wit bitches kickin it up the ride
and you damn right we be puffin on the ly
spitin amazin shit and we just don't try
bumpin out the east coast flavor
niggas while out cause they cant stand our behavor
bitches while out cause they just wanna slave ya
but we just want sex and they wanna date ya
then when you shut them down they yell out they hate ya
haters all around claim it's hard not to fall
but i always manage to stay on top of it all
now everyones sayin that they ball
but damn they aint got nice things at all
no cars nice clothes money or ice at all
no shoes no watch no 9's or bitches at all
you aint event in the right mind to claim that you ball
you pussy ass bitch you don't represent the east side
you walk your ass to places cause you got no ride
the flavor will torment you and eat up your inside
leave your ass layin there dead not alive
i got hundreds in my wallet you only carryin a five
east side flavor is just to nice
we got niggas that'll kill you just for your ice
spit there skills that'll eat you up like you was rice
if you claim you east side be ready to pay the price
cause will slice and dice and get your head captivated
we know niggas in the marines that got activated
if you can't understand this you better get it translated
we aint like the police you aint gona get interigated
just shot up with a phew by a phew
you know on the east side thats how we do
ya'll never find us alone cause one aint better than two
face it our style is just wetta than you
are rhymes are just betta than you
you heard that shit so what you gonna do
we aint never gona stop representin east side like we do
belive that we hitin your bitch to
and if were not well she want us to
and your a faggot ass muther fucker so you probaly do to

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i see you finished it, heh, it's nice, it has a nice flow, but the rhyme scheme is a lil basic, try to throw some multi's in there, change it up a lil, keep flowing
EAST SIDE!

Nice flow.

Try using a little more inner rhyme in your lines too.
It's tight though.

Peace.