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Old 03-01-03, 01:46 PM   #1
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TTP presents, DeathToll and Dimensionz - "life scriptures"

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-DeathToll-

Scribbles jotted over the papers lines
Defines, the crazy times in this shady mind
Embrace these rhymes, no more panic in dreams
Now anarchy screams…no love from balcony scenes
Defied my race, won’t be surprised by hate
My thoughts and my pen defined my fate
Gutter intelligence, my minds up with the cons
Fuck where I belong, pain gets sucked from tha bong
I love luck buts it gone…deceased and rotten
What’s the meaning behind scriptures believed but forgotten?
See kids flee when the cops come, panic and strife
Although it seems that I’m not done, I’ve had it with life


-hook-

The raps I’m spittin’ help me accept the facts on livin’
When I put pen to paper I just map traditions
Relapse with writtens that destroy and collapse ya visions
Garbage rhymes scripted from past decisions


-Dimension-

Ancient Scriptures, visible on Painted Pictures...
Tainted Dictions, Got me Debaten whetha I’m Haten Fiction....
Im Saitins Victim, in Disbelief of this Rough Presteege...
No Lucks Concieved, even Struggling to Out Tuff the Breeze....
Therez Lust Indeed, to diminish Tomorrows, Pain and Sorrow....
We Gain and Borrow, the Money and Fame, and the Nice Named Cars Yo..
When i Write, I cause Fright like Artillery Strikes....
Hard Killings at Night, Give me the Right to Despite this Disgusting Life....
That i see in my Eyes, hoping in the End, There'll be No Trend of Strife....
Trust ya Demise, Dont Pretend to be a Friend, and Stab ya niggas in the Back like a Knife.......
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Old 03-01-03, 01:50 PM   #2
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nice fam....on the real....the first verse and hook r tight....the second verse was tight....but didnt seem to be on point like the rest
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Old 03-02-03, 01:33 PM   #3
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wtf? this is crazy....getting slept on when there's kids in here who wack as fuck getting replies saying how dope they are
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Old 03-02-03, 01:35 PM   #4
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hmmm this ish is subpar nothin all that speacial im not into the deep boarin type shit i dun think no one else here is either but decent collab
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Old 03-02-03, 01:54 PM   #5
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this wasnt anythng spectacular and nothing
stands out to me it flowed alright
nothin more


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