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Old 09-28-06, 06:55 PM   #16
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Brown
fake personals work now?

ok uppin


you called me a jew tho! wtf..

fake personal!!!

oooooooooooo

holla!!

2-0. more votes would be really cool tho.
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Old 09-28-06, 09:48 PM   #17
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Lmao, u know wut i mean......
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Old 09-30-06, 12:24 PM   #18
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your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses
your wack as fuck.. i don’t need to glance your perspective
cause Brown eye warns all readers – ‘ass is suggested’

vs.

Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit
Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!
Fuckin geek u stink, please explain why i never hearda this lame
Ur the weakest Link, thats y i can't find SHIT when i search ya name


Tony, don't know why ya fed. I don't think that line was meant to be a personal, it was a joke, but anyway, Te Ora came pretty nice. 3 quotables plus a very consistent verse all around, a bunch of other lines were close to quotable. Sound clit was a hilarious concept, just wasn't used as a punch well. That makes 2 good verses in a row, keep 'em coming. Tony, you came decent too. Cap line was a nice personal, felt that hit hard, Te Ora nameplay was pretty fresh, and weakest link was okay, but that was about it. Consistency wasn't as good in ur verse and Te Ora's quotables were slightly stronger which I think gives him the edge. Good battle tho, u both put in a decent effort.

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Old 09-30-06, 01:32 PM   #19
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your mocked everywhere.. but i’m saying that i’ll boot ya
TB is great @ RB.. Carnell Williams looks like a player of the future
but you aren’t a playa.. i can tell from the shit i’ve read in your verses
you got mad bitches.. hittin’ you over the head wit they purses
your wack as fuck.. i don’t need to glance your perspective
cause Brown eye warns all readers – ‘ass is suggested’

vs.

Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!
Fuckin geek u stink, please explain why i never hearda this lame
Ur the weakest Link, thats y i can't find SHIT when i search ya name

close battle i don't really feel like breaking it all the way but ima go with Te Ora for consistancy and an overall harder verse in the end
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Old 09-30-06, 09:43 PM   #20
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you are original.. a breath of fresh air.. you get the gist of it kid
your abnormal.. till i made them bruised from fists to ya ribs

N.Te is the best.. better than you, you'll see me run through
your were booted from the punchline league.. but i'll let you be 1-2

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tony



Im takin but still chick huntin, wont b a prob nah, i doubt it
I'll either b fuckin ShanTe Ora bitch this dude used 2 go out wit

Damn kid, you gonna fall quick, tryin hard but outta luck still
I MEAN IF ALL THIS!!! dont make ya punches hit, then WTF WILL??!!

Fuckin geek u stink, please explain why i never hearda this lame
Ur the weakest Link, thats y i can't find SHIT when i search ya name




V/ Tony....i felt like he had more lines and overrall better ones.
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Old 09-30-06, 10:49 PM   #21
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eh too late now but uppin anyway
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Old 09-30-06, 11:22 PM   #22
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V/tony

better overall... y? cuz i fuckin said so
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Old 10-01-06, 08:06 AM   #23
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Te Ora wins 4-2.

Te Ora wins (2-0)
Tony Brown loses (1-2)
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