Yo! I finally found this, had it in an old notebook, I wrote this when I first started writing rhymes, so I thought I'd post this for fun (all but the first verse), check it...

Yo this is like the first rhyme I ever wrote, no joke,
so yo be honest if I flowed or choked,
and if you’ve seen some of my later posts,
then tell me if I’ve elevated or just stayed in this note… check it!

Check out these rhymes written like free styles,
Get used to it cause I’ll be here for a long while/
I’m nowhere near a mike controller status,
but yo that really doesn’t matter,
I’m still gonna try to bust rhyme that make walls shatter,
Having rookies lose control of their bladders,
While my flow keeps getting sicker theirs gets sadder and sadder/
I’d have these faggets shitting bricks, cause I just jumped in the lyrical mix/
Coming wit hand strikes and kicks, harder than a football blitz/
Don't make me have to slice necks and wrists, so don’t ever start talking shit/
And don’t get out of order, or be ready for the slaughter,
Of course I mean this metaphoric, as in a verbal slaughter, mothafucker…

Check out what's written, Using hard to comprehend words/
Mixing adjectives, nouns, and verbs,
to spit out an ill-sounding verse/
Having u whack rappers planning for the worst,
Barely holding on wit FAITH! like Fred Durst,
hey yo take cover, u bout to get hurt/
cause I just sparked the match and my flow about to burst/
and splatter out to the atmosphere,
making the spot hot like somebody was holding crack in here/
Content bitter like an onion; will have u dropping tears/
not much to look forward to, but much to fear,
If u in front of me and not by my rear/
and I don’t mean my ass, I mean behind me, u dumbass,
don’t try to get funny or u'll be hearing a gun blast,
simply for talking, not even for cash/

So what u think, that I don't hold heat, I live in streets,
and u ain't nothing to me but a pile of meat,
I could leave u dead on the streets,
wit a hole in ur head bigger than a 50 cent piece,
so for ur sake, just hope that I miss,
Its over, u already felling a cold breeze,
I don’t give a fuck, I do whatever I please,
Remorseless, so I won't feel a damm thing while I get ready to squeeze/
BANG!/ And this completes my verse of verbal slang/

I thought I was pretty basic, but yo tell me what u think compared to other of my rescent posts... peace

dis waz nowhere near where u at now,u came up alot,developed betta ryme schemes n wordplay 4 sho,n multis got hotterd den when u waz at dis level,so good work,1

Lies.....all lies....
u know this is the best shit you can come up with now.....
frontin like this was ya 1st shit....
u cant come better then this now or in 20 years.....

weak and wack for a 1st timer....
cuz i dont know about the rest of ya'll niggas
but when i started i wanted to write some ill shit....and didnt settle for weak shit like this nigga did right here....so fuck that excuse about this being your 1st time......
you always wanna come ill and nothing less.....



Peace......
1..............

Ps: for all ya'll 1st timers out there....dont start like this trash shit right here..... try and TRY!!!.....keep tryin til u come ill.....

^shut your fuckin face bitch!

You know you liked it bitch... lol... damm if only I didn't know yo only talk shit (raw), i would be annoyed... but like a said, I posted it for fun... oh yo, yo, check out my sticky, then talk.... lol...