here i am dropping music for people who dont read
ya'll just gonna ruin it cuz none of ya'll leave no feed
maybe im overdoing it whenever i let my pen bleed
here's my pad i drew in it but now theres no need
ta carry on any longer we dont respect the culture
we disapointed its father and bitch slapped its mother
filled it wit imposters that turned inta one hit wonders
should hand out oscars for teaching kids cuss words
all these terrible actors make us look gullable to it
these perishable bastards will die makin us look stupid
throwin away the skills and hyping up the beats
its like promising beauty while your married to the beast
its like shaking the booty while the shit fuckin wreaks
its like feelin her boobys while all the air in it leaks
so i tried ta ressurect it cuz whats left of its scary
but what could i do.......i left it in the hip hop cemetary


yea just was bored and felt like writing some shit

links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236386
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236398

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this was....a nice freeverse man some nice twisted concepts of multies here and there also some iight metaphorical shit..nice drop all together but make something of a story line now since you can drop metaphorical and multie syllable....try it out man it would be a nice try!

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I liked this keystyle/freestyle verse. I liked the metaphors and your wordplay. The multis were so so but this was a good verse.7/10

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

thanx for the feed ya'll i appreciate it
any pieces u want me ta RTF on drop a link

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thought u did audio??????smh

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lol i do but i was just droppin sumthin cuz i was bored and just felt like writing

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