"Untitled (Incomplete)"

replied to nightmares and EnchantMent

writing poetry is expression, emotions/
that exsist all 'round even floating the ocean/
when I travel I write, it's usually at night/
cause thats when I'm most inspired, from the dark quiet sights/
I use my feelings mostly, written within the pages of my book/
that cushions the insainity, the sin in a nook/
I listen to "Pain" by Pac for my in-spiration/
listen to Highlife by Cypress Hill for verbal creation/
That you can't see clear fo the words that you don't hear/
There open wounds that neva eva conclude, my personal fear/
My homiez down wit me, my lyrics, my flows/
for all y'all that don't know the rhyming glow that I show/
So, follow my lyrics for me and the Lords sake/
Don't ever be ovarate or hate my lyrics that intimedate/
what goes or stays, so PRAY/
all ya'll people out there stay clear from my way/
My peotic words plow down through a dangerous path way/
don't judge the right-the wrong-the words/
Cuase I'ma be the first poetic freestyle Korean influenced when occurs/
for all of that dont' understand the life of mine/
with a crecifix in the light, you can find out my lifes meaning; AT THE RIGHT-TIME!!!/
Ya know what I'm saying, what you hearing from my mouth/
Everything is nonstop (still working....)

I'll update this piece to complete it.

alright...ya lost your flow a couple times..really toward tha end
you sai way then you rhymed pathway..iono its not my ish

thaother one i read was better but stay with it homie