R. Christensen
Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
eh not bad
Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
Lol... nice

Grams
Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
Rofl i liked this
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
LMAO oh damn... True

v/grams
got this going to grams..

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Beating me is fantasy, and as cocky as that might seem...
You need to "get a grip"... on how to develop a rhyme scheme
..haha. i liked the rhyme and it was a nice flip. fuck the simplicity shit, it hit.. and hit hard imo..

Its not a fantasy of winning, your ok... but then again
you do MMA so you can get a grip on sweaty men
..rofl! this was dope. funny and a dope personal! good flip as well..
Probly can't fight for shit, WWF reject likes to wear tights
and when backed into a corner......................
he treats it like a textbattle, he becomes a bitch and bites
..naw dawg! any "biting" punch done on chrit has been play'd to death.. ANY!..

Stretched as shit... ya neck will be when I leave you in bad health...
Since..
...the only thing I wear thats tight... is when I hang ya sis like a champ belt
..not as good as the first one, but it hard and was a decent flip..

overall, pretty damn good battle here. chrit had a nice first punch, as well as grams, but gram's second was play'd to high hell! that cost u big there. and chrit's second punch was cool, but could'a been WAYY harsher imo! so with consistancy, i gotta give chrit this one. good job dukes!

v/ chrit

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