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View Poll Results: Who won the battle?
Jinistarr 2 66.67%
Opponent 1 33.33%
Voters: 3. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 03-05-03, 09:54 PM   #1
Jinistarr
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Chaos Vs Jinistarr

IP: 73F8 AF50

Yo son since you wanna challange out
the blue you go first!!!

rules are:

16 bars maxx
No crew votes
First to 5ive
No recycle rex shit


Now lets get it on
 
Old 03-05-03, 10:12 PM   #2
Chaos
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ok lets do this, 12 bars match em'

i know it's time to kill when my body fills with rage/
your style couldn't be ill, if your girl gave you a.i.ds/
bitch you broke as fuck and the debt rolls on/
yo ass couldn't blow up, with 10 petrol bombs/
when i rap raw, it just makes you hate more/
you couldn't be more wack with a bat and baseball/
your lyrics are decent, but we know you battle wack/
Jinistarr couldn't play a emcee if he went to acting class/
and don't talk about money, guns or pinky rings/
you can't win, you might as well write with invisible ink/
u ain't got punchlines, yeah you heard when i said it/
my beef can remove teeth, call me the dentist/

post soon
 
Old 03-05-03, 11:03 PM   #3
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From every angle hollow heads will dissenagrate ya vest/
Put you in the middle of a 'Crossfire' like the letter 'S'//
Those weren't 12 lines of dissing, those were 12 lines of forgiveness/
Notice that's why your "sorry" ass talked about me in every sentence//
Think about battling me be 4 you over bite/
Toss ya 'brain' over the 'moon' so you can think about it 'overnight'//
Wordplay, your gay, earthquake-......."yah i know that shit was wack"/
But ya dad 'dugg it up' on your 'birthdate'//
Your an asshole so i'm denied to crush ya/
Bonin' in an esculator is the only way i fuck up//
After this bar i'll call you bitch made/
"Senior" i should smack you 'six levels' down cause i wrote this shit in '6th grade'..//




Your not ready for me kiddo, when you are
you'll catch some real shit from me but, this wack
shit was enuff to kill you..
 
Old 03-06-03, 01:09 AM   #4
Jinistarr
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Uppin for votes
 
Old 03-06-03, 01:23 AM   #5
LaRyan Shabaz
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Jinistarr, I really like your wordplay, a lot of creative stuff in there. However, I don't like your flow at all. I felt you fell off in lines. Infrequency. Don't worry, I won't be able to vote on SHIT for a few months at this rate. I would actually give this to Chaos despite the disparity in clever shit. He had flow, and it came consistent. His wordage wasn't lacking, per say...
But Jin, you have the foundation to make killer friggin' lines.
 
Old 03-06-03, 02:08 AM   #6
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Wtf... wordplay? i had no type of wordplay in my piece just
a rhyme at the end.. to vote for him you got to be a dickrider
i simply ate this nigga.. hands down...wtf!!!
 
Old 03-06-03, 02:12 AM   #7
JJ Cal
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WACK WACK WACK, vote jinistarr. choas is a complete joke.
 
Old 03-06-03, 02:16 AM   #8
T-Square
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Ok a real battle vote, heres why...

Jin, lotsa str8 ideas, not quite enough rhymes, but punches made up for it...

Chaos, AIDS an illness, is horribly overplayed, (I got told that over a year ago)
Your flow was better, but to earn respect, ya gotta come direct...
 
Old 03-06-03, 01:20 PM   #9
Jinistarr
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2-1 uppin.. EZ EZ
 
Old 03-06-03, 01:50 PM   #10
JbRePpInNJ
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vote jinistarr

he came harder overall .....he had more creativity n WAY harder hittin punches.....he took it from tha start
 
Old 03-06-03, 01:58 PM   #11
play
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yo i gotta give dis 1 2 ma boy jinn ..... he fuckin murked u chaos..... yo jinn i like ur punchlines, some creative shit...... and 2 u chaos ur a fuckin joke y do u even bother rappin shit ma lil sista could take u out and shez only 7!
- jinn maybe we could battle sometime soon cuz i really need a challenge round here!
 
Old 03-06-03, 04:32 PM   #12
Chaos
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it's actually 1 - 0 to you, play and them other chumps don't count, they ain't registered voters.

i wouldn't say you ate me neither, but your verse was nice.
 
Old 03-06-03, 09:53 PM   #13
fithycalibur
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lol ha, got damn they should call dat nicca sin-jin

my vote=jin ofcourse


not hate'n his shit was hot str8 to da point his opponents neck
lol ha
 
Old 03-07-03, 02:42 AM   #14
Jinistarr
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What ever nigga i won 5-1 and the only reason you got
one is because that nigga that voted u was a dickrider


k.o- kiddo
 
Old 03-07-03, 03:36 AM   #15
Dirty Shanks
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I'm a registered voter so it's in tha polls, Jin got this with them tight ass punches. Nice, no doubt he got it, need-I-say-less........... euhh actually I should have.

peace, props, and respect to both.
 
 


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