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03-05-03, 11:17 PM | #1 | ||||||
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STeaDY feat D.G"Speakin MindZ"
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03-06-03, 03:41 PM | #2 | ||||||
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dam uppin
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03-09-03, 02:24 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 4350 AFF4
dam uppin
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03-09-03, 08:44 AM | #4 | ||||||
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1st guy sounds aiight...flow needs work,its not horrible..it kinda fits the beat,but i didnt peep ur other tracks so i dont know if thats ur normal flow or just for this...but rhyme scheme seems cool..it seems like u mumble at times...before the beat changed..afer the change it seems better..overall not bad,but we all get better with time so keep droppin..
2nd guy..mumbling a lot,ur voice faded out at times and came back,just stay at the mic,your schemes pretty nice too..flows a lil better... and um yeah... return the favor...and peep my track please.. |
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