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03-06-03, 08:50 AM
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OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
All Feedback Is Appreciated. Peace
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03-06-03, 08:58 AM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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I wasn't really feelin' this.. the rhyme itself was good.. but I'm not in the mood for one of thoise up-lifting you can do it topics.. nawmean.... your flow was on point for the most part, your vocab was good.. you need to make longer lines, with the crazy vocab you could have some serious shit there..
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03-06-03, 09:00 AM
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OriginIll
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LOL @ ^.... ok... thanks i guess
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01-14-05, 06:52 PM
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Tight.
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IP: C959 12E0
old LoL, evolve is doper now though.
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