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Old 03-06-03, 10:42 AM   #1
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two complete and total different personalities
2pac the rebellious philospher to life
chinoseoulja the lyricist who falsifies poetry
one whose honor is great another who pursues imaginary glory
under the title of poetic scriptures, your misunderstandin's threw your character off balance
as poet you do not EXIST, perhaps in another realm more so rappin words and not understandin yourself
what comes from the inner shell of your soul, the spirit you can never kill and shouldnt sell, the sacred words and holy thoughts created under no spell
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Old 03-06-03, 11:39 AM   #2
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hmmmm...

...okay, i appreciate your views (to an extent)...or at the very least, understand them (to an extent)...

...but you can't have a go at someone cos you don't think his work was poetry...especially when poetry comes in so many different forms..

...i thought his piece was poetic in a sense...and i don't think his 'motives' can be questoined in such a way..unless you know him..do you know him?...

either way, criticism maybe should've been a bit more constructive...and once more, his work can be considered poetry...

...i'll leave this open to othr people's thoughts, including chinoseoulja's...

BUT IF THE REPLIES BECOME UN-CONSTRUCTIVE AND ABUSIVE..THEN I SHALL DELETE THE PERSONS POSTS AND POSSIBLY CLOSE THIS THREAD.

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Wisdometernal - your 'motives' behind this piece, but more importantly, the meaning of it (what you're talking about) are more than welcome, i'm intrigued...
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Old 03-08-03, 10:50 AM   #3
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this was no attack just a mere critical distinction of criticism
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Old 03-08-03, 05:34 PM   #4
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this was no attack just a mere critical distinction of criticism


Fair enough, i just felt the criticism was a bit unfair...blunt if you would....

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