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02-02-07, 12:17 PM | #1 | |||||||
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for an audio/ FEEDBACK. first audio in years
IP: ABEE BDCE
he's been murderin', killin' violently blood spillin'
an assasin', master minded, worlds greatest villain shootin', blastin, cop slashin, in broad daylight crushin, explodin', blowin' shit up, in plain sight detective, effectively helpin', trackin' em' down hidin', runnin' 'round, never seen, never found where he at? where he gone? where he went you think two gats dispersin, got his message sent? well it did, he got half of america scared he said: "you can try to kill me but I got my body armor layerd" you'll never pierce it, and you'll never stop my guns from blazin' these eagles produce firece shit, and i've been wreckless since my college days of hazin' gun fire sprayin, too loud to hear what the police be sayin' "drop the gun, and put your hands up" they be prayin, endin' up in a puddle of blood, layin' gang bangin', killin', stealin', and dope slangin' http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3140654 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3140655
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02-02-07, 05:15 PM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 2B95 0529
I cannot picture you flowing that to a beat at least not without being off beat
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02-04-07, 12:20 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: ABEE BDCE
i have a good idea how i'm gonna flow it. and i've been expirementing with ways to spit it. and it can be rapped on beat, some parts in the text change tone in rap as you get to it. like faster, slower/ shit like that.
but, i just hope it turns out well, thanks for the feed, and keep an eye out for the audio, i'll post it sometime soon hopefully.
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02-26-07, 11:47 PM | #4 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
pretty good shit. lots of multies and yes its flowable to alot of beats ive heard lately. so dont worry about it. just find a good beat round here and try with some of those... i like this piece.. good job
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03-09-07, 12:05 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 5492 2C2E
I THINK IF HAD A BETTER BEAT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN A WHOLE LOT BETTER, BUT I REALLY THIS LIKE KEEP IT UP GOOD JOBhttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239755........................
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