i didnt read the whole fucking thing cause it was longer than a africans dick carrying buckets of water back to the hut... it was dope though... nice effort... A+

uppin for some feed from more experienced users. This is gonna be tha first track on my album. Let me know should i improve or just get rid of it because it sucks? let me know.
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uppin 4 tha last time.

meh.... I like drugs that's why I peeped it... you don't know too much about the subject do you.... you should try only writing about what you know about... like instead of drugs in general, pick one ex:buds... or liquor or somethin...

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Dont tell me i dont know shit about drugs when i've sold more drugs then is in your whole fuckin country. And i aint talkin about chronic you fuckin canadian pot head lol. You have no idea what i'm about so if i were you i'd keep my mouth shut.
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its sposed to be a full track how u gonna say its too long

dayum if you want to be a good rapper you gotta read and if this ish is too long then give up

man i got a feeling in a couple of months you'll look back on this and laugh

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