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Old 03-05-07, 12:32 PM   #16
TonyTone
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lmao, sean and shone sound NOTHING alike. idc wut country your from
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Old 03-05-07, 01:10 PM   #17
DaTrusHurtz
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Call me the DA the way I persecute wack frauds,
Once I showed my case they declared him guilty as charged
This was wayy too simple. There's no wordplay or wit involved in this.

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That punch was stupid...it's obvious you won't get far,
If anyone ever said sean-bright, they were talking about a star.
eh, with a more original flip this coulda been okay, but felt it was too simple and obvious
No chance of murdering this art form, maybe next time,
But for now, how can you possibly kill text? You can't even end rhyme.
i liked the way ya set this concept up, prety good feed

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Man my shits rhymes right, how bout you get your accent right,
Just mad the last thing he shined on was a picture in lite brite.
okay, its not bad i guess, just too simple and needs wit to it

Showcase's 2nd bar I think won this for him, it was pretty cool.

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Old 03-05-07, 09:06 PM   #18
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show wins

battle closed.
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