http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240726
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yo this a joint off my new mixtape.....it's on the Rick Ross joint......but yall will hear how the flow is way different..........'preciate any feedback.....

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pz

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quality is very clear man...nice. Yup I heard the original song to this. Your flow is pretty good looks like you tryina faster flow than usual. Not really feeling it man I'd rather you go lil slower cause it's honestly harder to understand. most of it i can understand but sometimes you flow a little weird wit it. overall its not bad man just rather hear somin diff from you.

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damn much better than i last heard from you. one prob i see right away though is since you're tryna speed your flow up you need to be more careful with the dubs cuz alot of em are off. quality is good, lyrics are pretty simple, flows on point i think the entire time except like i said....the dubs lol hook sounds pretty good. not bad at all

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lol @ the beat.. man people sample anything.. nice though
damn got better from the last shit i heard from ya bro props... sounds like ya adlibs a lil high and off in some points... this a good style for ya man.. dwell on it and pick up on ya words and ya got the shit homie.. nice track ya got here man 7/10

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...preciate da feedback............

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Is Jin your inspiration?

lol...sorry if that's racial.

beat is cool

FLow was valiant in your effort...but got sloppy in spots...good energy here


not great...not bad....decent drop bro


P.S. Hook is decent...