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03-20-07, 06:40 PM | #1 | |||||||
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jus a lil Freestyle
IP: 81E7 DBC2
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151389
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151391 ain't usin your mind you'll be losin your lines, writin scriblle scratch, this a freestyle, still better than your written raps, i could be high off my ass, passed in the back of the class, still askin were the blizzle at, ass load of acid, strapped with a chest full of plastic, 1 hand with a ratchet, other on the matic, causin massive havoc, it could be devistatingly drastic, one false move could cause static, and have your ass wrapped in black plastic, i stay intact with the gat like a magnet, out for the cabbage, a nigga out to live lavish, wether its takin the past tense, condensed like defragment, i live off hate its relaxin, check your demographics, you fuckin democratics, get a fuckin job, cause welfare i wont have it, n fuck a liberal, cuz if its war, i'm at it, i like conservatives, as long at u shut up bitch, cuz im the baddest. oh n make sure yall check out "3 different thangs" did it the other day n got locked forgot thread post Last edited by CrackaBox187 : 03-20-07 at 11:26 PM. |
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03-20-07, 07:18 PM | #2 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
keystyle.......................................... ......................and you stretch your lines too much
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03-22-07, 12:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 33E3 44D7
dont drop freestyles anymore.. write ya shit... reheasre... and repeat steps 1 and 2 serveral times
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03-22-07, 03:00 PM | #4 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 27E7 9FF9
there is alot of haters in this ra-site who wont give you a decent replay.......
i thouight this was decent sound like a bit of eminem and also a bit of papouse keep going at it everyone got different styles u'r many may not like but its your own style keep hitting them till they accept it you got alot of multis keep at it... |
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03-23-07, 02:57 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 33E3 44D7
I aint a hater I just wasnt really feelin this peice by him....
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03-24-07, 10:31 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: ABEE BDCE
Being a hater and a person with an opinion are quite different.
This piece ain't bad, it's got potential and has good word use. Keep it up.
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03-26-07, 08:25 PM | #7 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 09BF CB64
Reminded Me Of The 2pac And Snoop Joint 2 Of Americaz Most Wanted........ Keep Doin What U Do Tho
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