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04-13-07, 08:58 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Final Thoughts
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Final Thoughts As I stand among the whispering tree's Stare un-seeing at the fallen leaves Your voice echoes from so long before Before life closed you outside it's door Your words " it's only a bit of puff, i'll stop when i've had enough." The leaves they rustle with the sound Of raining tears upon the ground You said " Mom it's just a bit of weed." Then soon followed a bit of speed Dont worry I can quit anytime Back then believing every line Too late you felt the needle push Seduced again by a sudden rush One day you knew it all to late The devils quest had sealed your fate " I love you," I shouted to un-hearing tree's " I miss you," the words are lost on a frozen breeze In this place seeking solace where there's none to be found Just your memories scattered with the leaves on the ground Ask yourself this as your life starts to drain Was it worth losin Love for the rush and the pain |
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04-13-07, 09:09 AM | #2 | ||||||
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04-14-07, 12:31 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 3F9E AEC0
daym dawg, i was feeling this peace hella, cuhz im in da same situation and yeh gotta think over dis shyt. but yeh mayn the structure was simple, but dope it was easy to follow and u can get a sense of the character goin deeper and depper until it was too late. i liked the ending too
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