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www.myspace.com/paranoidxl

first verse: Yung Red
2nd verse: Paranoid
3rd verse: Prah'Ject

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3159079
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3159078

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like how the first jack my ol name.. but yeah he should change it up.. he aight tho.. decent shit.. 2verse is better then first... iight shit there.. 3rd verse.. prah'ject... kid is a beast... best verse.. iight shit

You could have the wackest lyrics and i would still enjoy this song cuz i love this beat.

I basicly on the verse i was feeling the flow and the lyrics were cool.

2nd verse i dislike the ma parts in the beginning but it was cool straight through....lyrics were alright

3rd verse prah'ject -i had to listen a few times cuz i could berly here but when istarted understanding the lyrics were cool and ya flow and style really cought my ear...

Good track all the way through....keep up the good work.

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The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
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yea this beat is grown and sexy....the first verse needs to smooth it out a lil....its a lil too hype on a track like this....needs to be seductive...its a lil rushed....thas my only suggestions for that one.....second verse....it starts out with 4--365436 ma's a lil overdose....the flow is alot more choppy then the first verse....need to make it flow a lil more....your starting to get the hang of it tho....prahject on this is what i was talkin buot for the first guy....smooth seductive....instead of bouncy n fast.....i think the end line coulda been dilivered better but still good shit....this isnt that bad of a remake...but i cant help compare it to the real version....not bad tho....

rtf on "real hip hop"

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thanks for the feed yall, uppin

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always loved this beat...

Yung Red - never heard this cat before but he sounds real clean..a little too much words though..this is more of a chill kinda track but i guess it worked. lyrically it was decent at best nothing that really stood out. flow kinda fell of in the middle a little.

Paranoid - yeah all this "Ma" talk needs to stop..flow sounds real nervous..its really choppy..just work on that. not everything needs to stop on that last snare. switch it up a little.

Prahject - aint heard u in a while..came the best on this track...swag is right for this kinda song..quality sounds kinda weird though..a little muddy. if that makes sense. nothing that really stood out in this.



overall this was an okay song..just lacked that feel that it should have..

lol first dude sounds like a cracked out version of lloyd banks lol other than that his lyrics was coo his delivery was jus like lloyd banks....lol man paranoid u came in witta fifty flow dont bite his delivery word but ur lyrics was coo.....the last dude was the best he came original wit his own flow....overall this was decent.....but right when the first two verses started i was like yall did they styles lol ight keep doin you pz

wow i kinda take that as a compliment sayin my style sounds like 50 hahaha, theres no way I tried to sound like em, but word thanks for the feed and I'll try not to say ma to much when I see a lady walk by with that nice fresh smell of fish

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Beat is sick.........

1st Verse - dude came in real crisp........his flow wuz on......not much delivery but it wuz laidback....lyrically it wuz where it needs to be at on a love track......

2nd Verse - flow choppy as fuck, and repeatin "mah" wuz mad corny.........sounds mad unnatural when ya spit man......and the erection line at the end wuz off, you rushed it so it could fit......yo before u write a verse read it ova and ova and see how the transition of flow doesn't have awkward breaks.........

3rd Verse - came in nice cocky swag.........way more descriptive bout the topic.....feelin it...came the best outta all three....

pz

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rtf on: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241547

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