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05-21-07, 09:21 PM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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Goin Out of Business
IP: 8A60 97E8
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05-21-07, 10:39 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 5E98 B05F
feelin this beat..like that guitar
ya voice sounds pretty martketable..i like your swag on this track. good job. quality is pretty good as well..maybe turn ya vocals down a little. sound like you from the East. hook seems real empty..maybe add some adlibs. ayo get at me for a collabo... |
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05-22-07, 01:54 PM | #3 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: E979 6945
ya hook is lame. good pressence on the mic for sure. good quality and all just doesn't go into the hook very well. and ya the vocals too loud, and i usually like that but they still a lil too loud.
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05-27-07, 11:09 AM | #4 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 8A60 97E8
up this.....^^.........
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05-27-07, 11:52 PM | #5 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 79EB 50FF
Ight hook is weird as fuck..
I like you're voice tho, but flow is kina sloppy it's like you jus started rapping regardless of the beat pattern quality is nice tho stay up
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06-03-07, 10:30 AM | #6 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 8A60 97E8
up this..........
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06-03-07, 12:43 PM | #7 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
beat is def. hot
rock n roll nigga!!!!!!!! flow is slick here...but the delivery cud be upped some to make it really POP... Im def. noddin my head like ur smokey soundin voice...real husky...sounds kewl on track slick soundin track bro 1 |
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