Lost minds scatter--instant smile then mistaken for a loss--the mind and matter represented the cost--fellowship between the brothren--through the dark valley they fought--held the lattern set the pattern--Made the attempt and lost the aptitude of the land inwhich was sought--caused a million deaths within the most common of breaths--cut the corner and choose to join her--little did they know that evil had swormed them--And now its black--and their lost again--So now their pleding to recieve him-but for the fact they decieved him--they choose to pack their bags and leave him. If this pen could punch it would--Take back the death of our lost souls--then within mans minds they understood.. and so they grew to crawl--with little knowledge their shallow minds could not concieve it---THEY FALL


interesting i though when i wrote it lets here some thoughts...

I found it interesting...nice one....it was kinda confusing how it wus written but overall it wus Nice

ps: peep mine in poetic scriptures called "1st Kiss"

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