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11-26-07, 04:34 AM | #1 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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when im gone (freeverse)
IP: F4CB 9C09
yea just bout ta write some shit 2 the "when im gone" beat..if its wack eat my shit
outta my aunts house and back on that damn couch and as her ass shouts im ready ta just pass out was my last sense of hope but now im back here again im at the ends of my rope im bout ta countdown ta ten before i lose my sanity lose control and grip a pistol what do u ask of me im a soul stuck in the middle everytime i got a plan it falls out from under me so that i cant stand take the knife and cut ta bleed in the mirror i cant face me cuz all i see is crazy living over in bracey memories trying ta chase me i dunno but lately things been feeling outta place shit dont feel right to me just too much time ta waste the barrel to my temple and im bout ta pull the trigger the nervousness'll settle my problems getting bigger i didnt finish school my only choice was drop out but music is my tool the only thing ta cop out links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244778 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244792 |
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12-07-07, 01:10 PM | #2 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: 0265 319C
i was feeling it, this is how i feel right now the only thing about it is when u said
everytime i got a plan it falls out from under me so that i cant stand take the knife and cut ta bleed it didnt really ehyme or make sense |
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12-13-07, 04:16 PM | #3 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 252C 385D
I dont know dude, just because of this
outta my aunts house and back on that damn couch and as her ass shouts im ready ta just pass out was my last sense of hope but now im back here again If your outa your Aunts house, what are you doing back on her couch? Idk but other trhen that its still nioce dude good flow
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12-14-07, 03:17 PM | #4 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: F4CB 9C09
^^^i wasnt talking bout her couch...my couch over back where i was before i moved to her place...i moved to my aunts and she was a complete bitch so i ended up moving back where i used to live...
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12-14-07, 03:23 PM | #5 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 934F A17A
well if ur on ur old couch...how the fuck is ur aunt still yellin at u?
and why are u giving it another try? if its not at ur aunts shit dont make sense
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12-14-07, 03:36 PM | #6 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: F4CB 9C09
maybe i accidently mixed in the past with the present...but if u dont like it..eat shit. i didnt write it for u
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12-14-07, 03:44 PM | #7 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 934F A17A
maybe u did mix it up...maybe u should try and re read ur shit before u post so i dont have to be bothered with such lack of skill
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12-14-07, 08:20 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 2326 5166
Good drop not the best but it flowed nice and had a story!
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12-14-07, 10:26 PM | #9 | |||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: F4CB 9C09
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i have the skill ta get under ur skin and thats all the skill i need bro |
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12-15-07, 04:01 PM | #10 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 934F A17A
really? for somereason i find that hard to believe.
and if u disagree..set up a topical battle and ill even wager half of my posts..
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12-16-07, 12:44 PM | #11 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: F5CE BA36
u mite aswell wager all ya posts man, luck cud'nt save him............lol
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12-16-07, 11:41 PM | #12 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: E943 6C67
aye bro fuk the haters it even said its a keystyle in the title let the shit rip keep flowin dont be so sad tho we've all felt like that in life sumtime or another make sumtin happen! decent drop flowed well real basic but im fellin it! Elevate! chadidda
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12-18-07, 07:42 PM | #13 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: D753 A514
Yo I Think That This Is Bittin.....Not Sure.....Maybe From Ballerstatus.....IDK.....But I Will Find Out
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TrYoUt ThReAd^^^^^
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12-18-07, 09:36 PM | #14 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: F4CB 9C09
^^^lol if u think its good enough to be bitten then THANK YOU...best comment i got yet
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12-18-07, 09:58 PM | #15 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 934F A17A
lol@ this being bitten.....if it is...wise choice lmao
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