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Old 11-26-07, 04:34 AM   #1
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yea just bout ta write some shit 2 the "when im gone" beat..if its wack eat my shit

outta my aunts house and back on that damn couch
and as her ass shouts im ready ta just pass out
was my last sense of hope but now im back here again
im at the ends of my rope im bout ta countdown ta ten
before i lose my sanity lose control and grip a pistol
what do u ask of me im a soul stuck in the middle
everytime i got a plan it falls out from under me
so that i cant stand take the knife and cut ta bleed
in the mirror i cant face me cuz all i see is crazy
living over in bracey memories trying ta chase me
i dunno but lately things been feeling outta place
shit dont feel right to me just too much time ta waste
the barrel to my temple and im bout ta pull the trigger
the nervousness'll settle my problems getting bigger
i didnt finish school my only choice was drop out
but music is my tool the only thing ta cop out

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Old 12-07-07, 01:10 PM   #2
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i was feeling it, this is how i feel right now the only thing about it is when u said

everytime i got a plan it falls out from under me
so that i cant stand take the knife and cut ta bleed
it didnt really ehyme or make sense
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Old 12-13-07, 04:16 PM   #3
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I dont know dude, just because of this

outta my aunts house and back on that damn couch
and as her ass shouts im ready ta just pass out
was my last sense of hope but now im back here again

If your outa your Aunts house, what are you doing back on her couch? Idk but other trhen that its still nioce dude good flow
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Old 12-14-07, 03:17 PM   #4
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^^^i wasnt talking bout her couch...my couch over back where i was before i moved to her place...i moved to my aunts and she was a complete bitch so i ended up moving back where i used to live...
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Old 12-14-07, 03:23 PM   #5
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well if ur on ur old couch...how the fuck is ur aunt still yellin at u?

and why are u giving it another try?

if its not at ur aunts




shit dont make sense
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Old 12-14-07, 03:36 PM   #6
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maybe i accidently mixed in the past with the present...but if u dont like it..eat shit. i didnt write it for u
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Old 12-14-07, 03:44 PM   #7
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maybe u did mix it up...maybe u should try and re read ur shit before u post so i dont have to be bothered with such lack of skill
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Old 12-14-07, 08:20 PM   #8
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Good drop not the best but it flowed nice and had a story!
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Old 12-14-07, 10:26 PM   #9
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maybe u did mix it up...maybe u should try and re read ur shit before u post so i dont have to be bothered with such lack of skill


i have the skill ta get under ur skin and thats all the skill i need bro
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Old 12-15-07, 04:01 PM   #10
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really? for somereason i find that hard to believe.

and if u disagree..set up a topical battle and ill even wager half of my posts..
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Old 12-16-07, 12:44 PM   #11
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u mite aswell wager all ya posts man, luck cud'nt save him............lol
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Old 12-16-07, 11:41 PM   #12
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aye bro fuk the haters it even said its a keystyle in the title let the shit rip keep flowin dont be so sad tho we've all felt like that in life sumtime or another make sumtin happen! decent drop flowed well real basic but im fellin it! Elevate! chadidda
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Old 12-18-07, 07:42 PM   #13
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Yo I Think That This Is Bittin.....Not Sure.....Maybe From Ballerstatus.....IDK.....But I Will Find Out
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Old 12-18-07, 09:36 PM   #14
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^^^lol if u think its good enough to be bitten then THANK YOU...best comment i got yet
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Old 12-18-07, 09:58 PM   #15
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lol@ this being bitten.....if it is...wise choice lmao
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