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03-23-08, 09:33 AM | #1 | ||||
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PEEP IT- ill freestyle
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Yea, that bomb chronic, Im on it
If popo come than i run like sonic Ima pimp, i get head like bonnets Make a bitch scream woo hoo like vonage- I do shit Your girl gave my dick flowers- TuLips Clueless Bitch, just listen, stop playin mindgames What you think your special? This dates onna timeframe Didnt use a condom once, now she wanna get it raw But if she wanna suck my dick i tell her getta bigga jaw My games on so tight i dont think itll ever fall Cmon nigga think you tough Ill merk you all Gettin ballsy? Ill beat you dicks like i was jerkin off No homo, How you hustle with no work involved Dealin with so many clowns, Its like a circus dog Im certain yall, that wack shit you spit Hang it up like curtains dog or burn it in a furnace dog I spit sick venom, I got that poison flu Think u wild child mimes make more noise than you We make it hotter than a motherfuckin boilin room If you get close to me, im Adam like Eve Put em underground, Plant em like seeds Bitches see, you know i bag em like groceries Other rappers arent there, they ilke ghosts to me Me and all my niggas full of scrap You goin nowhere runnin circles like a culdesack One on one, there aint no one to pull us back And when your nigga gets mad ud think the hulk was black D's backkkkkk
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03-23-08, 09:43 AM | #2 | ||||
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cmonn this needs to get commented on. ASAP
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03-23-08, 08:33 PM | #3 | ||||
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upppinnnnnn cmonn
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03-23-08, 09:45 PM | #4 | ||||||
Whys That?
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you need two feedback links or this will be closed.
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03-23-08, 10:02 PM | #5 | ||||
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here
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245529
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245425
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03-26-08, 09:24 PM | #6 | ||||||||
Pushin it....
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shit was ok...i guess, good to see people back form 05..start people
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04-05-08, 07:23 AM | #7 | |||||
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this is cool....you had some original shit and some not so original shit....all in all fairly witty...but you could definately do better on your word choice and syllable count..if you could get display a better understanding of those things i think that would definately manifest itself in your writing....thus taking it to the next level...stay up..1
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04-05-08, 11:25 AM | #8 | ||||||
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nice flow, freestyle pretty good as i read it and spit it and try to picture someone spitting it outta the blue, work on punches multies and you'll become alot better
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04-05-08, 06:15 PM | #9 | ||||||
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yeahh thats pretty much what i did haha and i was like illll freestyle cause it was kind of on spot at my boys house and he was writing it down as i was spittin. hahaa
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