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The truth is bout to hit yall clear/
audience around close want yall to draw near/ its about time that i spit this verse/ niggaz cant understand english so i'll put out a curse/ illiterate bastards understand clearly/ spittin whats real gon have to edited my shit severely/ puttin records out just to spread my name/ typing on message boards just to show my game/ checkin the newest shit out just to stay on point/ keepin my head clear cant be hittin the joint/ some rappin is made up but i'm keepin it real/ stayin on topic always somthin u feel/ a moment notice gotta no this man/ superhero spitter call a nigga peterpan/ now i'm the chef steady dishing the verses/ i spit first he ran gotta put out the searches/ the rawlest spitters i know gotta wipe they saliva/ step to the mic and gottem movin on like Mya/ |
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 267E 2CF9
Yo man, this shit is aiight, it rhymes well and flows good but instead of just rightin bout how u got game and how you own the world and that, yo should try writin about an actual subject..
Peace Out Yo!!!! |
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shit was hard fam. nice rhyme sceme and topic. keep postin
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