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09-04-08, 12:05 PM
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I don't lose
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someone hate on me!
IP: 1058 C353
word....cuz im doin emo rap now a days
blood. - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=6853413 my dude Damion Ortiz on the first two verses, im on the hook n the third but really tho, what chall think?
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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09-04-08, 12:06 PM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
i think im gonna go kill myself now.... *slits wrists*
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09-04-08, 12:07 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 1058 C353
that could be taken in many diff ways under different contexts
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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09-04-08, 12:08 PM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
take it in this context: a joke cuz the music was kinda emo and depressive...
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09-04-08, 12:10 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 1058 C353
at least its not ima go slit my wrists cuz this sounds so bad...and i just waisted 4 min listening to it
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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09-04-08, 01:02 PM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
loll well now that would just be a little bit overboard even for solja boys music
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09-04-08, 02:12 PM
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IP: B1A1 1156
The beat is off the hook unfortunatly you didnt do it justice. I felt your delivery was strongly lacking my guesses are you were reading your lyrics. The hook wasn't differentiated enough from the verse to stand out. You can make it work just work on your delivery. Pause at times to let the meaning sink in and ply with your flow. Stay up.
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