A black escalade with tinted windows drives up to a Fleet Bank on a rainy day...The skies are dark...Silently you can hear the roar of thunder...As rain falls heavily on tha roof of the escalade...Three men dressed in all black step out...Domain sitting in tha front seat is the first to walk into the bank...Shorlty after MeNTiLL follows...The last man to exit is 13th Apostle...Leaving tha designated driver waiting outside...

13th Apostle:
On my way to the vault, I was pacing the minutes...
Told her I'd spare her, but felt appreciation diminish...
She was bathing in a pool of dismay, I made her a fool and a slave...
If she got smart, she got hit with the tools of the trade...
My Mac-10 at my side, sirens fractured my thinking...
Someone moved, I clapped him, now he's splattered and bleeding...
I grab the bag of greenbacks, I hear D-9 screaming...
I bail and grab the ski masks, I hear these lives pleading...
Blood flows, rage climbs to new heights of 'bastard emotions'...
Feeling no remorse for the souls captured & stolen...

After grabbing the ski-masks 13th Apostle comes back alongside Domain 9 to try and esacpe with the money he got from the money vault...

Domain 9:
To take charge of the situation I have to act quick/
"Everyone hit the floor and don't do nothing drastic!"/
The Apostle runs to the vault to gather up the cash/
We only got so much time so we had better act fast/
Before long I get a feeling we got to get out of this place/
Soon after I hear a noise in the distance, my heart begins to race/
Someone tripped the alarm and sirens is what I hear/
It's the cops I get nervous as I hear them come near/
With rage in my eyes my comfort is my AR15/
Seeing tomorrow's headlines "all pronounced dead at the scene"/
I ask for forgiveness as I look up to the sky/
With a tear in my eye I hope for the best when I die/
Now we're in too deep to stop and walk away/
The clerk keeps crying and regretting this day/
She says she's married and has a newborn baby/
Expecting me to free her but her words won't change me/
It's evident to everyone I have my priorities and agenda/
No matter the circumstances I will never become weak or surrender/
Going out like kamikazes I'm a born offender/
Surrounded by police, I hold the hostages at gun point/
Out of time it seems I have no choice but to run for it/
Mentill keeps saying "Greatness requires sacrifice"/
A hostage runs for the door so I had to take another life/
The Apostle shouts "I got the goods, it's time to go home"/
Mentill says "Not all of us can make it but you two go on"/
Remembering his statement I realize what he has in mind/
As he winks at us and turns his back it's his time to shine.../

13th Apostle:
Outside the traffic is flowin', there's no room for mistakes...
No time for errors, so I watch every move that I make...
In hopes of leaving...I stay in a constant groove with Domain...
I have a bad feeling, but I'm refusing my fate...
If you get in the way...I got my Uzi, grenades...
And an AK-47, I'll let ruins remain...
With my head in a rush, I feel the punch of death in my gut...
I see MentiLL give a wink, and then we head for the truck...

After recieving signal from MeNTiLL to head for the truck...13th Apostle and Domain 9 grab the money and run full speed...They make it to the truck and take off...

MeNTiLL:
Aight Im goin' out shootin, Should give yall time 2 escape
I might die, I might not, It's a chance Im willin 2 take
Tha oddz aint great, Im outnumbered, It's like 20 to 1
It won't be fun, But in less than a minute it'll be done
Im glad I aint gotta son, Damn, Im feelin' kinda woozy
Nuthin'll move me, "Ayo!", Shit they can't hear me, "Put me in a movie"
God? Who's he? Damn it PoET, U need 2 get a grip
I got a uzi a back up pistol, Wit two clips
SHIT! U had 2 be tha tuff guy right? U juss had 2 be tha hero?
Aight fucc it Im ready, Five, Four, Three, Two, One....Zero
Shit, Im fucced, They got me surrounded, Im trapped
I must be lost off in space sumwhere, And I need 2 come back
I need 2 stay intact, On tha real, I need 2 keep my mind straight
FUCC!!They got my leg, Now aint this shit juss great?
I ain't 'posed 2 be in this place, Im 'posed 2 go on and live
2 late 2 surrender now, I really wish I could say, "I Give"
But I got faith in God, So why does it seem Im followin' tha Devil?
Wat tha fucc got into me? I should have never sank to his level
God I accept U as my Saviour, To wash away our sins U died on tha cross
Even tho its 2 late 2 put me on tha right path, I juss wanted U 2 know...Im lost......

MeNTiLL is shot down by the swat team sent in the bank after his short blaze of glory...But there's still the question...What's happening to Domain 9 and 13th Apostle? You'll have to wait for part two of this story...To be continued...

Finally.... damn that was a long time coming... i was feeling it man... everyones part was nice

Mentill i like your last line.... Domain you came hard dawg... Apostle was tight

as you can see i am too lazy to critique, i did read it though

nice drop fellas

Nicely done, everyone brought their own points of view to the shit, first guy got the scene down straight and the middle guy showed a more ghetto perspective, third guy just ended it cool, like bible stories in the hood an shit..

^lmao... After all the shit myself and Mentill have been through to get everyone together on this I think we deserve some hella feedback. I just happened to still have my verse and had 13th drop something then had Mentill add his in at the last minute. lol... this was supposed to be dropped about 4 months ago featuring myself, Sneeky, Endiphrent and Mentill... lol... let's get some replies comin

pz

damnit... up!

all i can say is that there is no room for improvement, that piece was as close to perfect as i have ever seen.........dont know how to say anything more.......keep it up!

Yo, yeah shit was hot, dope story, kept rhymin and flowin throughout, It was a damn good read, I enjoyed it, keep it up yo!!

Peace Out!!!!

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Thanks for tha replies so far but can we get sum more? Peace

yea yo, shit was pretty hot, nice story.. I noticed a few places where a 3 letter word fucked the flow up abit, not anythin' serious tho.. I liked it all around, the story was pretty hype, an' mentill's verse was sinister.. shit, uppin' this..

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lol, 3 letter word?... yea, for this collab I think we deserve some good replies... and for this collab I think it should be understood that AI... by far... is... Tha Best... lol

pz

^^^I agree...we are the greatest.....

let's get some more feedback, honestly, i just found this thread, lol...i didn't even know it was posted yet...lol

Uppin'

P.e.a.c.e.

P.S. Th 13th Apostle, you're my favortie rapper of all time, keep up the good work...i love you...

^^aww, thats so sweet, i have fans!

I love you to 13th

P.e.a.c.e.

This piece was defenitly hott
i was feeling it all the way threw
i was especially feeling domain9
and mentill
keep upp'in

send me a picture of you guys

LoL...WTF?^...uppin for more replies....Peace