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Old 02-08-09, 04:26 PM   #1
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Put All The Verses Together You Get...

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Tito, Phenom, Nos, Judicial, Young Kidd, 286, Big Picture

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LE your verse was lost...you took it down from SC i guess...

if anyone wanna mix it lol go dl the files...

and if you wanna add to it.. just send it to me.. i'll add it
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Old 02-10-09, 10:05 AM   #2
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Word 2 the finished product... young good looking out on the mix....

Imma peep when I get home

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Old 02-10-09, 04:53 PM   #3
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no disrespect to Judicial....

but.... i just peeped the way this was peiced together???

YOUNGGGGGGGGGGGG KILLING IT!!! WOW....


This shit was hott untill the 4th verse... then YK kills it.... then 286 kills this shit!!! wit a diffrent verse than i remember hearinng.... imma have to resplice this.... let me hear Big Pic ....... i mean.... as a remix this aint bad....


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Tito, Phenie, Nos, Young, 286 ....

wheres LE's verse??? KILLED THIS SHIT..... thats a lineup and a half... imma resplice all that together... and start a Myspace for Rapverse.com .... This could be the start to something.... INNNNNNNNNNNNTERESTING


Props to everybody who spit a verse on this joint.... FEELING THIS FUEGO!!!
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Old 02-10-09, 05:26 PM   #4
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1st guy and 2nd guy were weak, but delivery was ok though third guy scared me your mix is really bad done but after a while I was digging you lyrics were cool too......4th guy I didn't like at all, lyrics were whack and delivery was iffy.......5th guy was ok, cept you rippin the most used style there is now adays the gay lil wayne whine lyrics were ok I guess, 6th guy, props to you style was dope, lyrics were cool and flowed well, stil a little basic but cool, 7th guy na mix is awful, prolly wouldn't like it anyway wasn't feeling anything about it


So if the order is right then nos and 286 Im feeling the most, judical and big picture are the weakest imo.

overall sounds dope some verses are whack but most are cool delivered well lyrics could be a little more head turning but yea. peace
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Old 02-10-09, 05:34 PM   #5
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lol i lost le's verse..
couldn't find a file with it on it..
and i liked his verse..
if you got it...re-splice lol
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Old 02-10-09, 05:35 PM   #6
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good deal, way ta get it together lm
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Old 02-26-09, 11:24 PM   #7
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anyone ever find le's verse? lol
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Old 02-27-09, 04:52 PM   #8
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Negative cecil.....
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Old 03-18-09, 01:40 AM   #9
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I still have my shit written, I recorded and 286 mixed it but I didn't like it, but I can kill this, ima record tomorrow and someone can mix it for me and get this shit on here

Tito what happened to the rapverse myspace?
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Old 03-18-09, 02:14 AM   #10
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Not sure if we're leaving feed here, but figured I'd drop a little bit since I gave it a listen.

Honestly out of the 7 verses on this song, I only found 3 that were done really well (1st, 5th & 6th). The 5th verse is a league above everything else on this song, both as an artist and mixing wise. With that said, none of the verses were bad, although the 3rd one seemed like they didn't have enough time to get all of their lines in, too much going on, messed up the flow.

Also, how long was this track, like 6-7 minutes? Hate to break it to yall, but nobody is going to want to listen to something that's 6 or 7 minutes long, outside of RV. So if yall are trying to actually push this as something and make something out of it, you may want to cut it down somehow.

No hate, just dropping some feed since nobody else is.
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Old 03-18-09, 02:40 AM   #11
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^^^ good point...

but i havent lisen to it so i dont know who is on it or how it sound or anything...
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it was done just for fun im pretty sure dude
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Old 03-18-09, 04:04 PM   #13
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Lol thanks for the feed on my verse i guess, i dont feel above the rest. haha.
uh. lets do anothing beat. haha!
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Old 03-18-09, 06:48 PM   #14
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yea actually nvm i aint recording, ill save those bars for something more worth it lol
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