aight 12-16 bars...deadline tonight

ight u spit first

here goes some'n quick

i'll have u strikin losses like nurses on crack/
cant u read the puzzle, u nothing but wack/
when i have u pleading like a bitch in court/
like fission, i'm seperatin ur bitchin, twat/
havin ur shit stamped with murked/
so u now conceal ur dick under them skirts/
cos i turned a pup to a bitch, in an instance/
so now u call ur pop, but i made him pee his pants/
dabatlaman, sounds like some'n out a kiddie act/
saw winnie the pooh? so the name was quickly jacked/
sit in ya place and embrace ur balls like hersheys out the packet/
cos u about to be zipped, like michael lost his jacket/

Your gurl is about to get tapped/
Your about to get bitch slapped/
DaBatlaMans gonna do it all/
ima take your head and bash it through a wall/
Man your shit was so fuckin wack/
Your deserve a fuckin smack/
You must have prewritin your shit/
Cuz it sucked just a lil bit/
Man your shit didnt even ryhme/
Fix your shit and come back at a later tyme/
What was that shit about michaels jacket/
Man your words sure as hell cant even hack it/
All you are is a Lil Faget/

Well both your Rhymes were fuckin shit, but i gotta choose sum1!
For a start G-Spot (d-dot) your lines never rhymed!!!
Here is an example of a rhyming word

Start word= Detox

Rhyming word= Beatbox

now that aint hard now is it???

Dabatlaman your lines did rhyme together, but it was still fuckin shit, I really dont want to vote on this but i will...

Vote=Dabatlaman

peace

1-0

batlaman for the same reason Quil Spit stated 1

damn u want me to be on some elementry type shit? man go learn how to rap rhyme before u complain.....walk/talk....wtf,,,,,spelling doesn have to be the same doggy...it all comes down to prononciation

2-0 hoe

Ill give it to Dabatlaman cause i wasnt fellin ol boys ish
but any way my vote =dabatlaman

3-0 ko

lmao at this forum...no wonder y'all aint gettin newhere...lololololol