Right this battle is important, simply because you are a cheating little Bitch, so i'm gonna rip you apart...

RULES (pay attention)

20 lines AT LEAST (this means 20 lines or more not less)
3 - 0 KO or 5 Votes = win
No d/r or hatin votes
You Spit First, Like now

I am really fuckin pissed off that you used my rhyme tactics you little fuckin Bitch

Drop yer verse yer fag let me see how good you really are???

Come ON You Lil' Bitch Drop Yer Verse.

You Got An Hour An I'm Calling A No Show.....

oh remember wat i said dabatlaman u gotta KO him i u wanna join our crew
thats wat u get for fuckin using somebody elses shit u get me

Aight then i'll drop first...

You are such a fag...

You better pick up speed an run as fast as you can//
coz i'm runnin' with gunz blazin straight at ya dabatlaman//
I'll hit ya so hard you'll disintegrate into grains of sand//
I wont hesitate to pull tha trigger on tha gun in my hand//
I could even rip you if i was rappin with a brass band//
i'll serve a verbal uppercut an you'll never come to land//
your Raps gettin more laughs than the jokes from Jo Brand//
So you think your good enough to join our crew//
If you win this Battle then we will welcome you//
You couldn't even beat me if you hit me with a shoe//
I'm an established G in this game you are still new//
I'm still gonna fill you with tha lead from my twenty two//
My lines will be discusting, hard and dispicable//
My rhymes are dirty and really unpredictable//
Your like a sour grape so easily removable//
sing for the moment is Eminems newest hit//
Sing for your life is my next verbal spit//
20 lines is nothin to a nigga with flow like this//
but 20 lines is impossible when you act like a bitch//
I could write a better rhyme than you if i had handcuffs round my wrists//
talkin of wrists you'd be better off takin a razer an makin some slits//
Coz there aint no fuckn chance you can spit a better rhyme than this shit//
You steppin on chartered turf, there aint nothin that could be possibly worse//
read this carefully flick through this rhyme crunching verse//
Coz at the end of all this theres 3 - 0 KO written on yer HURSE....

Drop yer FUCKIN' RHYME BITCH

YO are you doin a no show on me?
You are more of a bitch than i thought
I'll give you the rest of the day to drop yer verse
remember 20 lines or more

BITCH

Drop yer FUCKIN VERSE

look quil spit /
your rhymes to me sound like shit /
im unbeatable im untouchable/
ill put you in the hospital/
my lyrics are unstopable/
trying to out rap me thats mission impossable/
fuck u and your crew they fagets dressed up like a bikini team /
hiting each other doggy style with cases of vasoline /
ll be that foo that shoots your head/
fill you with lead/
leave you dead/
swimmin in red/
ll treat you like a prisinor fuck you with some lotion/
and when you pregnent with my baby ill make you get an abortion/
ll treat you like my chick/
put you in the corner and make you suck my dick/
im taking over you town killing all your people/
you best respect me cuz i invent the sicuals/
i work for a living if killing people counts/
dont fuck with me cuz ill make your head bounce/
u cant beat me and im only sixteen/
wait let me call my mental brother maybe hes a challenge and hes only thirteen/
it was nice batlling you/
but yo shit gay so fuck you and yo crew/
peace

there you have it quil spit now what

ok...
you both came really simple....


dabattleman...
you gonna need alot more practice, juss ma opinion...
cuz if you think about what you wrote...
couldnt anyone writes thos...
it aint nuttin special, naw wut i mean...


Qiul-Spit....
your flow had longer bars wit betta punches....
but pretty simplistic....

vote=Qiul


do me a fav., peeps are sleepin on r.b......hit up a vote...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34852

this one to…
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34850

1 - 0 Quik-$pit

Uppin on votes

Uppin votes people????

Some people be sleepin' Vote Please

Pz

lmao...both of u need some serious elevatin...lollolololo




:::shakes head in dissapoinntment:::

damn dot i read your shit and almost fell asleep if you didnt get koed i would have voted you shouldnt even be postin in this forom get your ass over to W.E.C

but anywayz....
i think this was a good battle cuz what quil lost in his long verses he made up in punch's
and what dabattleman lost in hard hittin punch's he made up in flow.

just cuz i was fellin dabattleman's shit a lil more he gets my vote.

VOTE: dabattleman