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Old 06-12-09, 04:38 PM   #1
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Axing bradly middleton

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i just wanna fuckin bash this guy, someone i truely hate, and its gotta be said punk ass always threatens me so here's a diss to put dis turd in hell..

Sinner verse

fuck dis cunt named bradly, i'll murk ya ass badly
always stick ur ass into my biz, now im'a end ya life sadly
punch dat fuckin blonde head of urs, callapse ya jaws
u dirty bitch keep stickin ya dick into my sister, ya whoor
i dont give a fuck,,,, ya suck dick, make an ass of yaself
and u think i need ur help ,ya ass needs a good belt
always put me down when im around, thinkin ya sound
but 2 me your just a clown , i beat ya like mike tyson 1 round
tall ass puts me on edge, such a faggot the way he looks
but he wont step up no more to me, cuz he know'll be cooke'd
he's shit at football, kicks like he's a female
i can tell he's a freak he likes my sister wot a gay hole
u got nerve for tryin to fuck, keep dat fat ass mouth shut
get tony renolds on ya ass, all the way from south punk
if u see a faggot named middleton, run over the simpleton
if he tried to be good at rap, the only thing he could rap is jingles son
fuckin bitch ass, i'll whip ur ass like im the passion of christ
with spikes on the end,, and have you screaming for ya life
we can tell ya a bitch son,,, never gonna be rich son
you'll only be good at stackin dishes in a pub kitchion lols
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Old 06-12-09, 04:55 PM   #2
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verse 2 fuckin bitch slit those wrists or get my fists lodged in ya skull bitch
wot's ya problem mate, i hate you yes, i leave ya left in a hole ditch
watch wot ya say im pure greatness, attracted to the fakeness
u shouldnt have been born , u was born like jesus in a hay nest
i gotta go deep on u u was such a creep, when u battled b4
u couldnt beat me anyway dats why i left ya feet shattered whoor
i beat ya like dis is rap sport, crack whoores like you
u got knocked out b4 u aint liked everybodys wants to fight you
jelous bum, wid no dick i dont listen to a word u ever shit
but u keep sayin things and laughin bitch, ur gonna get leavered bitch
im stormy like weathers dick ,and u amount to feathers dat hit
i leave u severed in bits and then sown back together and shit
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Old 06-23-09, 12:19 PM   #3
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Honestly for a battle verse it's pretty lame and in which in some lines you praised him and made him look good while trying to diss him at the same time....when you really ended up dissing yourself...I.e. your intro to the verse and about him fucking your sister...punches..well aren't really any punches basically just low class disses...

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Old 06-23-09, 12:20 PM   #4
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Post 2 Links of feed you left on other members work or I will have to close you thread.

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Old 06-25-09, 04:08 PM   #5
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This should be closed based on this alone...
punch dat fuckin blonde head of urs, callapse ya jaws
u dirty bitch keep stickin ya dick into my sister, ya whoor
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