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"Hooligan X"
IP: B332 E82C
I hope I get nuthin but uppins on this thing,
cuz "Hooligan X" is supposed to be my legacy...... yo,yo,check it, yo Im like a devil on this mic/ oh wait I cant afford a mic, so let me start over again/ Im like a devil on this pen, Fuck 12cent/ today its Hooligan X/ cuz Im a bring it straight like a gun to ur chest/ dont put me to the test, cuz I cause cardiac arrest/ except when it comes to battles, they kick my ass/ cuz I diss myself 'fore they even have a chance/ Im apt to rip rap, I rap whack crap, I lack the facts/ to smack this rap outta Iraq, cut and lace'n the track/ as a matter of fact/ I always think people are talkin 'bout me/ cuz Im more paranoid then schizos on weed/ bein chased by the CIA and alien beings/ nuthins as it seems, u'll see what I mean/ I write nuthin like my pencil is hollow/ my words are more shallow/ then that Tri** that had my cock in her mouth/ so ditzy/ she goes to the swapmeet to get the Priceclub version of me/ that line wont mean anything unless ur me/ and u aint, so forget it anyway/ with this slight of hand I can twist my fate/ I can write this rap, I can waste my day/ days wasted to date is to many to hate/ rappin' in a frantic, manic, paniced mind sorta state/ if I died today, Id only have one thing left to say:/ "Fuck the world, Fuck everything I see/ fuck these girls that dismiss me, fuck these things/ fuck everything, fuck these gangstas that rock these guns/ cuz I know the muthafuckin' recoil will break their muthafuckin arm/ fuck Bush, fuck Stone Phillips and fuck Saddam/ fuck the Curds fuckin turds, and fuck the Turks/ fuck France, fuck MSNBC, fuck the U.N."/ fuck this war cuz its got me puke'n/ cuz we nuke'n, for no real reason/ I hope this shit blows me up real quick/ Id rather die and be dead then to see this bullshit/ but dont get me wrong, Im all for this war/ its about time we took out this lil bast-ard/ (bitchy voice) "Well how can u go against urself like that I dont understand", well bitch just listen/ my mission is to break predictions of my complicated compisitions/ cuz Im full of constant contradiction/ Hooligan X stands for Hooligan unknown/ cuz no one knows me and those that know me ignore me/ the world can blow me, Im quittin life/ "Who the fuck wants to join me?"/ Ive been to hell and back and I dont wanna go back to/ "Hooligan's Inferno", cuz my soul's burned for over an eternity/ I wanna learn to be, the illest emcee in the world/ but how can I be, if I cant even get me, a girl/ to kiss my lips, let alone kiss me dick/ Its ridiculous, how many bitches want Sir Nickolas/ (my real name) they just admittin this/ Im more inconsistent then these bitches decisions/ that got me slittin' my wrists'n, cuz we aint fuckin or kissin/ gossipin' bitches fo shizzel got me wizzel fo kizzel, plizzel tizzel/ my dizzick, *izzerrizzerat!* (record scratch)/ my moods changing like Im menstrating/ my passion is fading cuz life is so fuckin frustrating/ and Im debating bout trading life for death/ its like a spider web/ everywhere I turn Im trapped/ Im mad, I hate crap and I hate this rap, Im so sad/ just wanna pull this pen, pull this trigger/ its my time suicide thru words *erer* (scratch)/ I hate lil bitches starin' me down/ my dick's out muthafucka stare at me now!/ I cant tell a gay joke without a homophobe/ threatenin' to beat me up, eat me up!/ like Im scrared of u, fuckin' cheap ass punk/ "Oh no, faggot!", u midget, u fuckin' Hoto Baggins/ thats like my only punchline, man fuck a punchline/ my whole rhyme's a punchline/ get it? I aint nuthin but a joke/ due to these crappy paniced notes/ people think Im all fun like my happy anecdotes/ well the devil's in the details, loc/ Im the kinda guy that would rather rhyme to an acoustic guitar/ then to a fake ass beat, rappin bout blingbling and dubs on a car/ Rap and the world are in pandemonium/ rappers and girls are faker then Cubic Zarconium/ molden 'em to be sumthin they aint/ they rap for the pay, they dont rap 'bout the game/ u asinine muthafuckas dont believe me?/ u ignorant muthafuckas dont feel me?/ heres a spoon, u stupid muthabitches can eat me!/ Hooligan X stands for Hooligan Me/ dont u dare say this rhyme doesnt have a theme/ cuz the theme is me unleashing these things otta me/ my heart and soul turned words/ for better or worse/ this came outta me harder then mass effects of sound effects/ fuck 12cent, cuz I am now officially Hooligan X/ 12cent...........C.Static.......520.........peace |
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IP: 703B ED0E
Life is a test, and I got stress...I think of suicide and death, but only in jest...I love every breath, an' it'll be a mess if I'm the only one left...I've been blessed, the fact I 'aint been put under arrest....
Frustration's managable...dog, Do It!! |
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IP: B332 E82C
thx for uppin
hey everyone else dont sleep on this I know its long but u can only read half and give me sumthin on that |
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IP: 5153 3B92
ohh snap!!!!
i cant even pick my fav. two liner man.... you just fuckin exploded man, shit!! whoever aint uppin this shit is wack.... |
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IP: B332 E82C
lol thanx a lot homie
did you catch the shout out to u at the end? if u know how to yet pm me later, if not Ill holla at u later keep uppin |
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IP: B332 E82C
uppin
hey what the hell? stop sleepin and wake the fuck up u peep this and respond and Ill do the same, c'mon guys |
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: B7F5 7C7C
Yo dogg, its aiight, I'm not really much of a fan of people talkin on and on about how good or who they are for a whole rhyme unless its Real hot, now this was aiight, rhyming was there but the scheme was a little inconsistent, but in all it was cool, probably a little long for peeps on Open Mic as happens to me, just gota make sho its hot if u want people to reply but def agree, soo many cats sleep up in here!!!
Peace Out Yo!!!! |
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IP: A330 1FF0
uppin
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IP: 177D 1D36
heyfuckers
u think u might wanna reply? anything at all? wake the fuck up! I reply on ur crap Im just lookin for like 2 more responses thats it |
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IP: B55D DC08
that was some tight shit mancuz no one knows me and those that know me ignore me/
the world can blow me, Im quittin life/ "Who the fuck wants to join me?"/ i liked the shit it was deep so ya keep it up dog uppin |
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IP: 1819 6011
i dont care how long was it , the shit was immense..
mad props home boy. |
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 144A ADA4
yo, that was loooooong.... I can tell you ain't too good yet, but it was a'ight... the flow was pretty good thru-out, the vocab need improvement, I noticed alot of elementary words... the record scratch thing was kinda wack, and some of the bars could've been structured better... I'm-a give you a 4/10.. I know that's not good, but yo, keep practicin' you're about as bad as I was when I started.... peace..
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IP: 4722 BE4F
thx for uppin most of u guys
uh Blunt.......lol whatever man I aint gonna say anything cuz I dont wanna start no beef so whatever anyways thx for uppin |
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IP: D4FD 1114
Pretty nice shit, nick.. Not bad at all. Hey you wanna come to my house and record that shit?
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