When the lyrics all the same... Gimmics all in shame,
ballin stallin lames left to ball in the game...
shootin for fame... with the lights off, now the fights on,
nimb wit and this is ya last chance... to bad ya life's gone...
so wrong when ya carrer plummeted,
everyone knew you wanted respect, no one expected you to run from it...
you stay blunted..? You never smoke weed,
can't believe a man regressed to impress these pre teens...
things seem at the darkest hour, I'm stalkin this coward,
walk from the shower... Av reigns now... blockin the towers...
two positions are fatal fetus... only bated leaders are prone,
lackin the tone... listenin to weaklings... crackin they bones...
wrackin the flows... stay focused when hope snaps and blurs,
proven when your roarin 20's started to purr...
preparin to counter-act, let the facts set these truely,
you never staged a comeback... ya act was a tv movie... (Let's go..!)


(scratched hook...)


Get the movement movin... relivin the next shit,
Ya speeches do make the crowd move... to the direction of the exit...
how ya shatter records and you can't break even,
readin they eyes... live in dispies and breakin these heathens...
reasons you're here are inept... lock ya done,
not a one believes you pop guns, of geeks your the prodigal son...
should probably run... do something... get up, be out,
my dick is the flag pole hangin from the roof of ya mouths...
mockin ya clout with stones, rocks, ice and luck,
past eyes and outside, used half ya life to get fucked...
confirm ya thesis, Av releases dyin breeds in pieces,
objections to your reflection introduces ya weakness...
confusin you cheaters, movin you kids,
more commercials on top 10's than music is rottin the speaker...
knockin ya leaders out, to many gimmics trapped in the limmerics,
yall say nothing so I request songs with nothing but silent lyrics...



(scratched outro...)

nice drop, i liked every aspect of this shit here...good to see some talent get on Rb......been pretty dry latly...

8/10

Keep at it...

P.e.a.c.e.

Yo... this shit had some rhythm man, nice flow, and you had the wordplay going in this too... the length of it was good, not too fucking long, not too short...
"lyrics all the same... Gimmics all in shame,
ballin stallin lames left to ball in the game...
shootin for fame... ", definitely feeling the flow and wordplay on this man... keep that shit up kid

Peace

Get the movement movin... relivin the next shit,
Ya speeches do make the crowd move... to the direction of the exit...

awesome drop bro....
mad uppins

8.5/10

good shit... that's how you do it... copyright... before you post... I'm legal with it...

yeah liked that drop man
good piece with word play lyrics etc all good
chek out my drop on the war man

will do...

damn avolon tight drop.
your verssss were bumpin.
not to mention single lines.
"it IS good to see some heat."

keep em' rifling out.
'gang one'



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this was coo in my book...



i liked that punch..pretty tight...
this had some coo flow to it, you know what ya doin...
i got lost in a couple places but oh well....
i think you could elevate though, advance w/this type shit ya know?
the structure i thought could use some work...the wordplay was there but didnt stand out significantly to me...maybe its just me....i think you know you could do better than this too...still it was a dope drop..i was feeling it....waaayyyyyy better than some of the wack shit ive been seeing around here lately....
keep droppin yo..ill def. look out for you ....

props

~2~

This was a dope drop fam. Laced it with metaphors and wordplay. Hot.... i like it. Peace