Did this fairly quickly. It's a 'freetype' in a way...once again, kept it as raw as posssible...

A kid slowly dies in blood of innocent bliss
The shot'd been fired but she didn't feel the kiss...
Of death n pain spawned by a devils game...
in the cage of the sane driven insane by the shame
of society's past blame weighed upon these now outcastes
that are bred to last in in this vast land's ghetto's so tightly packed...
As worry strikes sacked towns of blacks, add latinos to that....
Asians, Indians, even foreign white cats...
that speak so few words Of the Queens English to be exact,
they lay out hate upon the welcome mat
To those escaping opression from tyranny's sword,
bearing scars of when once they roared,
in defiance of warlords,
raping their women and torturing souls of scared hoards...
Ruled with fear, divided and conquered...
yet they somehow came to be, across many a sea,
to this place they called their destiny,
as refugees of humanity's disease of war n greed,
power must be taken at all costs,
so one's name can echoe in eternity....
Yet sold short as slaves in this nation of hope
By gangs of parasticial hoors
Living slum life at the core
Whilst the rich soar more
Through the laws of red n green
Always ready to ignore the way the poor implore
Begging for mercy,
Only to cry justice with it's last breathe
And so fate is set
With many a regret amid the constant unrest
Another rose fallen in a vicious circle of endless death...

straight gangster. big ups on makin it all flow.

stAy up

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Heh...thanks i guess...

i liked that right there...i thought it was deep and straight to the point it was making...i have peeped some of your previuos stuff too and them shits is lovely...upping big time dawg...one

when are we going to collab for one poem?! DUDE!

appreciate the comments...

Widsometernal - Okay, tell me how you wanna do this. I was thinking a poetic cypher. 1-4 lines or whatever each. Then when it's complete, just sort it out amongst ourselves...

hit me up on varentao@hotmail.com if you up for that.

alright i liked this piece i think you opened up violence to another level rather than throwing out the typical "GHETTO OH HELL NO" shit. LOL Anyways you opened the tragidy of violence with all types of cultures without pointing blame to one race---History/violence/hope nice topic

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appreciated..

I felt your topic...straight forward...agree w/ deacon--you did bring talk of violence through word to another level...fashow