post your verse here

2 wins
1 ko
no crew or dick ridin votes


DEADLINE:TOMORROW

fuck it let me tell you how it goes down
it goes down by you lookin like a fuckin clown
the shit you speak is to outta beat you think you got it down
but you talk like a fuckin clown
not knowing when to quit spittin your shit
thats right shit, your rhymes go in and out of a time so quick
its like your life is based on rhymes created by slim shady
use a fake ass punk even thinkin your slim shady
when you flow wit it you try to make it complicating and shit
but all your sayin is shit, like when your praying i'd quit
what would you do if you thought you would lose
never knowing when to quit is gettin you into some deep shit
like fightin at yo school tryin to make yourself look cool
till you meet a guy like me, who fuckin jumps you on the street
so you know you wont win
you shouldn't even try to begin with your weak ass rhymes
bitch just stop denyin

anytime

u type like u got parkinson's disease//
this decision is not gonna be like ya personality............split//
imma "toilet" and these voters gone swallow up cause ya verse is "shit"//
i think u really got a lotta issues//
u stay gettin shitted on by niggas ya rap name should be tissue//
ill milk ya lyrics like cows in a grazing band//
u aint tired of this verse ya eyes just lazy man//
be cool and stop raisin sand//
cause my bullets give ya chest "two scoops" like "raisin bran"//
ya girl i tried to rape her man//
now she talkin bout she havin my baby.....damn//
she stalkin me and im movin out//
the only way my kids got in ya girl stomach was through her mouth

I come with thunderous text... you need 'dashes' just-to-make-your-punches-connect
A bloodthirsty demon... fangs puncture your flesh, just to put my hunger to rest //
you talk shit? I can't 'uncover your threats'... they're buried under your breath//

you're one to forget, I don't spare the whack, you shouldn't dare to rap //
I'll prepare attacks that tear and slash//
Pulse is like Arafat, 'puttin terror on the map!!!'

"smokedout411"gettin overthrown,
I'm usin his broken bones to 'carve another head' in my totem pole //
you get B.O.W. to grab your dick, we all know you can't 'hold your own' //

^^^^uppin 4 votes

fake ass nigga... your probaly white

uhh how do you tell who is winnin

anyway thats a phat beat... im just a newbie in this game so... hey if i could vote for ya i would

naw i aint white but anyway other ppl come n here and vote on so...... anyway im new to so calm down nigga

L-A killed this one... those are some fuckin ill punches dawg "I come with thunderous text... you need 'dashes' just-to-make-your-punches-connect
A bloodthirsty demon... fangs puncture your flesh, just to put my hunger to rest //
you talk shit? I can't 'uncover your threats'... they're buried under your breath//"....... damn.... the first line and last line of this bar were insane.. nice job...

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i agree blunt...

LA wins this ..

^^uppin
thanx
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