the months of creation spent facen another
two sons with eyes un-open,placed inside a hopeful mother
cells gathered setting the stages for the phases of tomarrow
an unseen danger unpredictably filled a half empty bottle with sorrow
a light borrowed permanently left the others in shadows
brothers battle for sufficientcy,missing the loss of tranquilities
embossed in an embodiment of criss-crossing abilities
still it seems in solitude there's only room for the presence of one
amongst a wombs discressions the essence of a shinning sun was spun
relying upon the breath passed through the lungs of life
steadfast in limited mobility,still striving with steps to survive
my heart beats,i'am alive but left blind to each new day
hands and feet reach internally for freedom,but solid walls restrain
pushing against the curtains grains with all my mustered strength
just another month to wait,escape my brothers fate and see the world
but im concieled,yet to be revieled,sealed as my mothers precious pearl
destined 2 steal 1's inner errodesence,feeling stronger by the
second,growing restless
so i send subliminal impulses answered by uncertain questions
"is this the pending moment?" "or a message emerging unclear?"
fearing the sincierity of intentions but my minutes are finished here
heading towards the exit of entrance,nearing my final approach
my idle's broke,a single stroke away when suddenly focus froze
hopes and dreams fade astray in a smokey haze that is death
its undeveloped figure & face chose to choke my fluid breaths
no second guessing my lucidity, i' am completely aware
solitudes' left me cornered carelessly, murdered by internal affairs



i wrote this a long time ago...i posted it under "endovidualmind" and then i got banned...and i will most likely get banned again for sayin i used to be known as "endovidualmind" but w/e

ahhh! yo what up son, too original kid... but I've read it before and replied then, so I won't say much now... glad you back man, hope you won't get banned again...

Peace

uppin^^^

yea this is tight. never seen this topic done before. ya vocab and flow both heavy as fuck. always nice to see sum originality put up in ere. def well above most of the pieces posted on ere. anyway check mine shinobi life aight peace

hahaha, yea you'll prolly get banned again...i replied to this piece last time..

10/10

hot shit!

P.e.a.c.e.

thank you.....13th its nice to see ya homie...get at me....

~2~

uppin yo

one more time...uppin