Yo peep this short though..........


I"M RuthLess and am back to bring quality, fake Mcs suffering from homosexuality
In reality there is no equality, I'm better then you so respect my faculty
I spit rapidly fluently brutally, so lets see what you could do to me?
Lyrically I spit sick spits make Mcs stiff blaze Mics like spliffs
Hold on kids let the legendary flex and spit
We bar coded Mcs who need a G scan
I am faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran,
You need improvements man, listen
Am more advanced then nuclear reactor,
Coming with the FUCK YOU factor,
Pushing more weights then a tractor,
Like a pussy magnetic attractor,
Talk shit and I’ll be your captor,
RuthLess a.k.a. Lg the Rap Raptor,


Just lil Piece easy......
And This is My real Pic on the LOW Thats GAnGsTA.......

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UPPUN U DAMN IMPUTENT SLEEPERS..lol

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This is avarage, you got some o.k. lines but you not really sayin nothing that make a nigga be like damn. seem like you got talent you just gotta pick up on some things. Keep spitin' doe

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Bang On The Table Productions

THNX YO Atleast Someone aint SLEEPING man it wus lil drop nothin big......UPPUN

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i can tell you could come with somethin hott. this wasn't to bad but it could be better. some of the lyricswere good some i wasn't really feelin but overall it was still good

yeah, if u put just alittle more time into this I think it could be better. Some of the lines were o.k. but like said b4, I never said "damn".........u should keep it up though, you could drop some hot shit later on if u elevate just a little bit.

THNX yo I just did this piece but couldnt finish it so i wus fuk it ama put it up.....but anywayz thnx for all coments


...I'm a Ghost....

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know what I think... these people can't think of anything intelligent to say so they read other responses and feed off of them.... but yo, ya flow was safe, honestly I was really feelin it
"I spit rapidly fluently brutally, so lets see what you could do to me?
Lyrically I spit sick spits make Mcs stiff blaze Mics like spliffs
Hold on kids let the legendary flex and spit"

that was straight... your flow was the best part tho, really smooth.. ne-way, EZ..

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its ok but the last part seems forced its really not saying anythign

"Am more advanced then nuclear reactor,
Coming with the FUCK YOU factor,
Pushing more weights then a tractor,
Like a pussy magnetic attractor,
Talk shit and I’ll be your captor,
RuthLess a.k.a. Lg the Rap Raptor, "

the words rhyme but they arent saying anything, but i like the rest before that part it was nice

NOW REPLY TO MINE BEFORE I TURN YOUR RHYMES INTO A PILLOW!!!!!!!!

hhhmmm this was str8 dawg....
sounds like the intro of a cd or something lol
but its str8
had some nice lines in there
good flow
keep em coming



~1~

THNX MYk....lol ama see what i can do...ama check yo shit and Blunt Thnx dawg....WUn


Uppun

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ya flow was nice on this and ya got a good rhymin scheme but its just too short. ya vocab was aight but ya could do it a bit stronger. sorta sounded like afu-ra. nice but just not anythin special. anyway check mine shinobi life return the favour cuz

AIGHT MAN...thnx for Peepin my shit ama make it longer...next time

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nice piece. homophobic stuff is not cool. just so you know. but the rest is aaight