this is for my old girlfriend!!bitch!!

yo yo listen up i got something to say
and its coming your way !lets go!

you know its gonna be a scary roller coaster ride
if you dont suck on this dick you better go run and hide
im not afraid to step up to the plate to battle a chick
if even their real wack with a dick
i dont even have to try when i battle you
just the image of me standing here really scares you
I busted a nut up in your mother
so how do u fell about having another little brother
this bitch is flat she aint got no tits
shes mad as hell screaming and throwing fits
what the fuck gives you the right to battle dis
your always so drunk u stick ur head in ur towlet full of piss
im like vinalla ice so what if im white
im standing her rapping and can deliver a viscous bite
yo im sick of this ride or die bitch
when were all crushing to hollywood ull be picking up cans in a ditch
im just starting to wrtie these lyrics
but ride or die aint picking up no chicks
in fact all that hes picking up is dicks

im out

just playing bud

send some replys

i stopped readin it at the suck this dick run and hide line.....
keep postin tho you'll get better wit it....

....um yeh

U needa up ya skillz,only word u used wuz dick and bitch,junk wuz pretty repetitive.Work on ya vocab and structure + think it out instead of jus writin sh!t.Stay ^
-Avi

all i gots ta say is elevate some more..then post something

yea that shits bad

I know you're depressed because you got dumped, and hungry to battle your ex, but you don't have to bite so eagerly do you? Jesus.

You're lame. Your name is ridiculous, you're an ass. If you want to throw a diss, use a personal if shit is personal. Please don't "diss" your former lady by talking about how flat she is, YOU WENT OUT WITH HER.

Newbies: Don't immediately post open mics when you register, try working in the cypher threads or something and seeing how we all think you're wack for this type of shit.

Keep... elevating...?

ya dude I understand if ur pissed and shit
and u wanna write to get shit of ur chest
but it feels a lot better if u make it more personal
and better too
disses like that are for yourself so dont be afraid
to say whatever about personal exp.
but keep it to urself if it isnt good
seriously take Shabaz's advice and hit up the cyphers