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Old 03-29-03, 09:36 PM   #1
lillem
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Haters Number 2

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Dis part 2 of my haters ryhme i busted a while back...These dawgs wont let me rest
so gotta ryhme dis shit off my chest...

a chemical imbalance now living my life in depression/
tryin to put down my knife god help me my heart is full of aggression/
you little punks think your ryders...dont try to approach me...outsidaz...ur cutting da line between pain n kindness/
my knife as my mike...ready to kill you..better run dawgs...cause i aint through...its a loaded gun pointed at ur whole crew/its one pop n your life is through
you wanna ryde with me..thinking ur part of me...holla at me...but aint seeing da whole truth behind the../
get a sex change you lil bitches...your like a rash on my nutz that always itches.../
hes a shovel stop playing and starting digging ya 8 foot ditch...BITCH/
you act all concern...but ya lame ass's is jealous...cause im hittin da dick in bitches...to there tummy it clinches..while rollin in style...got my pussy hittin my switches.../
you all front like you big time ballers...thinking ya got puss on call "N" you aint nothing but fags with a sore rear ass hole/
try to dis me thinking itll bring me down...spread rumors about my last chick..think it makes me frown/
does that make you men with bigger dicks...makes me sick...go grab ya paddle pops kids...a dick on a stick a never ending flavour you can lick/
i dont know why i waste my time..letting you punks bring me to da grind...you like a b-grade movie...
you got suspence...but no style...loss of brain cells makes for no sense/
so next time you front...with a steddy eddie looking blunt...remember dis/
i've earnt enough respect in my lifetime...to see you punks nothing more to a 2 year sentence of life crime..
my knife is out to kill you...full clipped ready to spill you...
so when ya close your eyes at night..youll see me in your vision...
on a darkened road ready to FIGHT....

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Old 03-29-03, 10:59 PM   #2
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nice flow dog
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Old 03-29-03, 11:13 PM   #3
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Holla need some more feedback
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Old 03-29-03, 11:18 PM   #4
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i like this dawg it was nice
i like yo style
had a nice flow to it
keep em coming


~1~
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Old 03-29-03, 11:59 PM   #5
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Thanx means alot....from ya guys...

Peace may da lord look upon ya...

More feedback yall
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Old 03-30-03, 12:17 AM   #6
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yo i like this flow man keep spittin.....

a chemical imbalance now living my life in depression/
tryin to put down my knife god help me my heart is full of aggression/
you little punks think your ryders...dont try to approach me...outsidaz...ur cutting da line between pain n kindness/
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Old 03-30-03, 12:33 AM   #7
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I like your style and your word play...but there are plenty of things in this world to write about that's elevatin'...there are plenty of mc's writing about sexual diss lines and knives and guns...I'm talkin' about enlightenment, Sun...you are one, so shine like one...keep tha flow though, it's tight no matter what anybody says...Peep my new joint, (Elements) people sleepin' on it...peace!
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Old 03-30-03, 05:33 AM   #8
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Much respect to ya all....PEACE
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Old 03-30-03, 05:57 AM   #9
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if i had a gun id come round there and pull the trigga for you. you fucked up sleeze. maybe you should try and hit ya dick in older bitches.
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Old 03-30-03, 06:11 AM   #10
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linez drawn has a point... you do need to elevate in the content department... otherwise everything seemed to be on point... keep rhymin
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