girls dont take this offensively....just something that popped in my head


"I think we should see other people"/
Really Ho? do you know what just came out of your peep hole/
besides this dick so big it should be illegal/
whats going on in your cerebral/
you just went down on me and said that you liked it/
now were seeing other people after we tried shit/
you lied bitch!/
dont say another word, im sick of this/
how many guys have you been with/
is it aids or is it siphilis?/
how come you never told me this?!?/
its over bitch/ dont throw a fit!/
"are you pissed?"/
of course im pissed/
heres a list of the dicks you kissed/
it ends at one hundred and sixty-six/
crispy lips that shake when it speaks
dont play ditzy/ I know youll miss me/
Im movin to bisbee/
with your sister too/ she's moving there with me/
peace b/

......Im just playin ladies you know I love you!

flow was on but, in all a 6/10 the sylables no where near matched up unless your like me and when you flow you lenghthen and shorten sylables like bone thugs, namean? good drop

peep heart poured out

its alrite, a couple of lines needed improvement, but still keep elivatin

thanx....i agree with both of you

I agree too... but the one thing that hit me though was that the flow in some spots reminded me of that Eminem song (the name of which totally blows my mind right now) but it goes 'I do know one thing though...chickens they come, they go...'


I still like your style